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love me this way
By cre
love me in my plastic house
when things get shaky
the snow falls down
frosting the two foot pine and
windows blank on the inside
love me in my souvenir swirl
the light bends and softens up the glare
and sparkles make it seem easier to believe
that all is good and love is safe
and life -if cold- is fair
love me in my snowglobe world
you can't reach me
but that's what makes it all ok.
-love me this way-
or love me not at all.
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Copyright 2004 cre
Published on Tuesday, June 15, 2004.
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2015, Nimue44
(289)
wrote:
Being beautiful inside a crystal globe. Yes! Loved this.
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On Friday, March 1, 2013, Star
(879) wrote:
utterly descripted beautiful words here.. hot damn,,, love this (:
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On Thursday, March 31, 2011, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
I still laugh at some of the things you said about Monkey and me being demented roleplayers .. Well I allways found fantasy pictures of "pixes in a jar" to be horrific in a very sinister human way. This poem hits the same note in me. I love your snowglobe imagery, and how the line -Love me this way- is like the very glass that borders it to the reader .. So now I think I just traped a fantasy pixie and enjoyed it .. That is the horrific part? Not realy since your great writting skills and intelligence planned it all :p There is and was alot, that love you "that way".
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A former member wrote:
just for the record I didn't mean U in my comments... shit That U was intended 2 b an I. My apologies.
Mantus Man
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A former member wrote:
very well written poem.
I Hate Love, or maybe U just have never experienced it for real. nonetheless you wield a mighty lexicon.
Mantus Man
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On Sunday, September 19, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
You use detail in your words I've never seen in any others poems, and I'm always left in awe (and a bit of envy;0) after reading a poem by Cre.
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On Monday, July 26, 2004, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
What a great twist on the "built up walls" theme!
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On Tuesday, July 20, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
"love me in my snowglobe world you can't reach me but that's what makes it all ok" - you're ability to turn a phrase never disappoints. I seldom have time to comment anymore, but I always read your work. Ciao, T/S
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On Thursday, June 17, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
beautiful write, it was perfect in every possible way
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i loved the flawless analogy and the wisdom of grace portrayed here, the message is strong and the words are beyond beautiful and life -if cold- is fair i loved that part and the last two lines
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
small words , shouted , but muted .. so many levels to this .. touched upon , and convincing .. eloquent is an understatement here ... funguy
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Lost_Soul
(34) wrote:
Love and sadness go hand in hand and this piece shows it quite well. I envy your talent.
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, worm
(1149) wrote:
look but don't touch... this piece speaks volumes about love as it is perceived... nicely done!
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
pretty and sad... but i think this speaks to a deeper foerm of love... the love that's still there when they can't get what they want... the love that's given without reciprocation needed. love without rules and limits and expectations. lovely.
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A former member wrote:
Love it... the end really brought it together... perfection!
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
You need to write far more often girlie. I've missed stayin' up reading your stuff. It's good to see you're still alive. As always, rock on.
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