preview of the path our dialogue will take

By KittyStryker

you can
see
the words
stumbling down
speech
tumbling
over
lips chapped
and bleeding
from the way
we kiss
each
other

close
call

almost
found
res

o

lu

tion

our lies
trip along
in twos
and threes
ever increasing
families

the truth
marches
forth
in fearsome
lonely
ones

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Published on Sunday, February 29, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "preview of the path our dialogue will take"

On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

gods - awesome, chilling truth/power throughout this... excellently effective write... and i could almost hear a deathknell steady solitary drumbeat emphasising every syllable of that last stanza.
On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, Sky Singer (153) wrote:

i also agree, the format is wonderful. excellent poem, kitty.
On Tuesday, September 14, 2004, Dayer (162) wrote:

my thoughts exactly
On Monday, March 1, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (171) wrote:

nice emotional piece here, great wording and structure, i like how you made it to where i can almost visualize it, good job ~Emptyness~
On Monday, March 1, 2004, Solace (1065) wrote:

I hung on each word like lichen to a rock, clinging in desperation for that conclusion, resolution if you will, you didn't dissapoint :)
On Monday, March 1, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340) wrote:

very nice structuring...awesome piece with its atmosphere of wonder...always a pleasure to read your thoughts...-l-
On Sunday, February 29, 2004, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

I really liked the format of this piece. Like a stream of subconcious thoughts. But the content is what really blew me away. Write on.
On Sunday, February 29, 2004, suicideseason (1636) wrote:

*nods*...i agree,Mike.the format is superb.and the emotion is overwhelming.i could quote this in it's completeness...but i'll just fave it instead.-tim