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a place to leave
By diavolessa
Leave here
From this ill place
Little girl with blue eyes
Leave, leave
whirl in bizarre truths of life
while I wait for one more pain
pain of life, pain of death
curse them all, little girl
the ones that love, caress, kiss
others that kill, hate then heal
others that slowly disintegrate themselves
leave,
give me your loneliness
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Copyright 2003 diavolessa
Published on Thursday, December 11, 2003.
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"Poetry"
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On Friday, April 29, 2005, Sin
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wrote:
dark and lovely...exceptional write ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
This is deeply heart and gut touching. About knocked me off my chair like that lightening bolt the third time I read it. I love it, for all the right reasons. It is a very good poem! Again, with your poetry some of the lines blow my mind.
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On Tuesday, February 24, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
touchingly dark.......you have written well my friend..............urban
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On Wednesday, December 17, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
Loved it. Just perfect; not a word askew. The last lines gave me a chill.
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A former member wrote:
*applause*
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