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Crush
By cre
I dream,
just to hold your hand, and
I am lost to imagination.
A sort of starry-eyed
fascination.
I would die to touch your hair.
I could perhaps,
collapse,
in a red-faced moment, shy.
I know you wonder why I sigh,
and swiftly look away.
It's just, you burn inside my heart,
but I hope you don't yet see me through.
I want to hide, but I fear it's clear to every eye,
that I am so in love with you . . .
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Monday, December 1, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Crush"
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A former member wrote:
This poem is so beautiful! It just seems both so sweet, deep, lovely yet simple like a teen crush. Just..... perfect. =)
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On Thursday, July 23, 2009, carlosjackal
(2787)
wrote:
Fantastic piece.
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On Wednesday, July 22, 2009, blue
(1409) wrote:
God, you've no idea.
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On Wednesday, July 22, 2009, blue
(1409) wrote:
so deeply...
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On Friday, February 6, 2009, blue
(1409) wrote:
Still.. always this penetrates me, so deeply. ~b
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2008, sanglante
(16) wrote:
My exact emotions presently. Gorgeous. -tomb.
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On Tuesday, July 24, 2007, Moonflower
(298) wrote:
*BREATHLESS*
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On Friday, May 18, 2007, blue
(1409) wrote:
... ~b
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On Friday, August 18, 2006, blue
(1409) wrote:
~b
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On Thursday, October 27, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
ya know, I can't possibly say what this does for me.. truly a fav amongst favs. ~b
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On Wednesday, June 29, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_
(69) wrote:
lovely and light! Perfect flow
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On Sunday, February 20, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
Oh, this is just so beautiful ~sigh~ I must have read this 10 times before I even singed up here, and ? how many times since. I Love It! ~b
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A former member wrote:
this is so cute!!
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On Thursday, February 12, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
this is truely lovely...beautiful words. FF
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On Thursday, February 12, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
how very very very sweet *sigh* the sentiment and expression of it, i found quite lovely, honest, i can almost see the blush of white skin.
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On Thursday, December 11, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Very romantic! Ciao, T/S
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On Thursday, December 11, 2003, Jadednoir
(28) wrote:
nice piece... me likey the to the pointness... and it reminds me of how exactly it feels....... great: ~jaded~
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On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
ah.......just a dream, so real
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On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Im So Glad To Arrive Back And See That Talent Never Wavers. Great. GPhD.
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On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, sole
(93) wrote:
You really captured infatuation and put a value on it and while love poems aren't really my forte I can definitely appreciate this piece. As always an excellent write.
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On Monday, December 8, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
Ooooo....I love this! It's so much ligher then many of your works...impish in a shy way almost. It made me smile and get a warm feeling. Absolutely a splendid poem...well done dear poet! ~JMDW~
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On Saturday, December 6, 2003, manunkind
(64) wrote:
i love poems like this. i love being in love, i love the infatuation. ahhh. this poem is relaxing. :)
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On Friday, December 5, 2003, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
This is so incredibly sweet, it made me feel all warm and fuzzy :) *~seraph~*
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On Wednesday, December 3, 2003, Drifter
(265) wrote:
Thats sweet. i love you to :)
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A former member wrote:
This is so beautiful and sweetly put. It left with the urge to say "awww" And I got a warm little tingle...
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A former member wrote:
that first glimps of new love, this was like a memory of my first case of puppy love, it wasn't until the smile was returned did I know it was more, lovely write,S/M
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On Monday, December 1, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
dahck dahck dahck! too good, cre. too good. -B
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On Monday, December 1, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
awwww! it's filled with lace edged valentines to a secret love, and bubble baths where you're free to daydream of being with them always... sweet, darling work.
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On Monday, December 1, 2003, Lost_Soul
(34) wrote:
I completely agree with maddin. I can just feel the love pouring out of this poem.
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On Monday, December 1, 2003, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
extremely emotive and painfully honest... a lovely piece of work. purr
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On Monday, December 1, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
What a feeling of happiness and love in this......the energy just flows incredibly....maked me smile all over.
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On Monday, December 1, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
This was excellent, great flow, and just plain beautiful, i truely admire work like this, great job, ~Emptyness~
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