Violent... sick fuck! animosity--

By RubyXero

He was flush among
the soggy stench filled corpses...
This open grave.
his solace.
As he soaked up
the essence of earth
to ameliorate.

I watched as the blood
slithered from his neck
and toward the dash.
Mediating the two sides
flooding the car
with his sick filth.
That .38 wound
and from his seeping soul
I held fast to this
pinch of hope,

In attempts to flee
his taloned grasp
I filled his lungs with spirits.
But those slitted eyes
saw opportunity, instead
to lash.
In sly distraction,               I
dis   a   p     p        e            a           r          e                                  d.
so I thought.

It wasn't love
nor longing.
But pure possession.
Not just the optics,
but his entire span!
from flesh to aura
expelled a deep hue
of acrimony
    a spitting venom
        gazing a vengeful scorn.

I don't recall the trigger
of what brought that
dark figure to my doorstep.
But he came
with a sinister sneer
demanding all I truly cherished.
And I was overrun by
my tongue held fast
against my hard willed attempts.
With perspicacity filling in
the formulation
must now

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Copyright 2013 RubyXero
Published on Wednesday, May 29, 2013.     Filed under: "Beat" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is from a vivid dream I had last night of my ex from a few years back that broke my daughters arm and raped me. The sequence is in reverse so the first stanza is actually the end of the dream. Hope you enjoy ^*_*^
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  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, May 29, 2013, FadedBlues (2945)By person wrote:

    ...nice format, beginning w/the end. some dreams are too vivid...

  • Devilish On Wednesday, May 29, 2013, Devilish (3760)By person wrote:

    Kill em. to break the babies (no matter the age) arm .. rape,, death is the only solution for such creatures.. hello there you .. and i hate dreams like this i have them often.. hugs. Scholar

  • RubyXero On Wednesday, May 29, 2013, RubyXero (577)By person wrote:

    Thanks :} it threw me off all day. I think that's why I chose to release it this way. It's weird I'm rarely helpless or afraid in my dreams. Usually I'm some sort of warrior... He definitely fucked me up... Apparently I'm still feeling the after effects

  • dwells On Wednesday, May 29, 2013, dwells (5649)By person wrote:

    First impressions and instincts are sometimes over-ridden at our own peril. I can still feel the depths of your revulsion, cheers Ruby!

  • blue angel On Wednesday, May 29, 2013, blue angel (1118)By person wrote:

    Dark twisted terror! Loved it. Visually awesome!! Nice write* ^_^

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