Vuelve, Tiempo, Vuelve

By maddin foxxxy

Come back time...
Return to me what I couldn't take,
the places I wouldn't walk through...
repair the pieces I did brake.
Come back time...
I had denied my heart
as it sang to do the right thing...
I only thought of the price
that pain was to bring.
Come back time...
I was just small and diminished
from the life I chose
and the one i had vanished.
Come back time...
I didn't mean to yell
and refuse to listen to
those who treaded hell.
Come back time...
He was all I ever wanted
and now I can't replace
because he keeps me haunted.
Come back time...
just for a little while
to leave the past behind
carrying on a smile.
Come back time...
I was afraid of you
and now that we have met
I wonder what to do.


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Copyright 2003 maddin_sexxxy
Published on Friday, July 18, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Great piece! Love the lines "Come back time... just for a little while to leave the past behind carrying on a smile." Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • finaldestiny On Monday, August 18, 2003, finaldestiny (72)By person wrote:

    aww time so simple yet we truly cannot understand it, good write, my props

  • Midnight Phoenix On Saturday, August 2, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    Very catchy piece. The arrangement was good, the story was good, and the conclusion was perfect. Your words sucked me right in.

  • Stranger On Tuesday, July 29, 2003, Stranger (263)By person wrote:

    Everyday a door closes. The path continually narrowing toward our final moment. Will you meet it with regret or contentment? - A concept gracefully and effectively ensnared by your words.

  • diavolessa On Thursday, July 24, 2003, diavolessa (207)By person wrote:

    nightmares of being human and making mistakes! regrets that fill your head till there is nothing more to cry or smile about! I love the little trip you took me though! {dia}

  • A former member wrote: yah I wish time would come back...I love ur work....mmm....

  • A Velvet Tongue On Friday, July 18, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    Time in all it's torments. We lose, we gain, and what lies in between can seem like hell. Awesome piece..I love it! ~Vel~

  • Jonas On Friday, July 18, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    ah, time, ever elusive, bearer of regrets... to turn back the clocks to take back a moment... often a fantastic journey in my mind that leaves me wanting a welles machine

  • Aurora_Light On Friday, July 18, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    i like this it makes me thin about something i like that nice job

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