i lost you again

By SourInnocence

I heard a voice I thought was yours,
And tried to chase it down.
But the words stopped,
And I lost you again.
I saw a face I thought was yours,
And I tried not to stare,
But I blinked,
And I lost you again.
I felt a touch I thought was yours,
And enjoyed every ignorant second,
But the lights came on,
And I lost you again.
I kissed lips I thought were yours,
Yet they seemed drier, and chapped.
I pull away and opened my eyes,
And I lost you again.
I had you once, but I threw you away.
And I tried to get you back.
But you broke.
And I’ll never know you again.

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Copyright 2003 SourInnocence
Published on Monday, May 19, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Amazing

  • A former member wrote: very true to life, every time i open myself up to someone i lose them. i can completely feel you through this work, thank you for sharing

  • A former member wrote: i like this... i can connect with it... i have experienced this kind of issue a few times in my life... great work, kudos for you

  • Aunty Depressant On Saturday, August 9, 2008, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    Oh how remorse haunts. May it hopefully make one think before they disregard another, open eyes to what one does have and learn to appreciate.

  • A former member wrote: lol reminds me of my ex-boyfriend at the minute...

  • A former member wrote: it really sucks when you keep losing the same person to your own stupid mistakes, I know how that feels

  • blackdarkness On Tuesday, May 20, 2003, blackdarkness (228)By person wrote:

    I can relate...this sound like so many things i think of..thanks for sharing!!!!

  • maddin foxxxy On Monday, May 19, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    this is so full of thought and abstraction...touched me deeply..could'nt help but relate to this as memories swept me over..brilliant!

  • Griffin On Monday, May 19, 2003, Griffin (114)By person wrote:

    it was kind of different but good, i like the coment about igrnoance

  • hate_doll On Monday, May 19, 2003, hate_doll (265)By person wrote:

    written with a lot of emotion, I like...keep up the good work...(!)

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