Lost Chance

By Midnight Phoenix

Her beauty so energizing
My love left immortalizing
Together so intensifying
But our hearts were afraid to speak

Her eyes were inescapable
And her touch was irreplaceable
Together so sensational
But our differences made us weak

Entranced
by
her
flame

I
would
give
all
without
shame

If
I
could
just
call
her
name

...But I’ll only find her in sleep

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Published on Tuesday, July 8, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Lost Chance"

On Saturday, August 30, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

Ahh yes. Very calming indeed. Great work. Tiger
On Wednesday, July 23, 2003, hate_doll (263) wrote:

this was as soft as silk to my mind, very lovely. brava :)
A former member wrote: wow...this one was truly amazing you took my breath away once again awsome job!
A former member wrote: mmm....-speechless-lovely ..truly lovely
On Thursday, July 10, 2003, Demosthenes (155) wrote:

that rhyming pattern is really awesome. and the meter isnt messed up! YAAAAAY!!!!! -B
On Thursday, July 10, 2003, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

taken through the feeling, showing us what is truly felt; then letting darkness fall, showing a dark parallel......well done my friend...urban
On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358) wrote:

this a calming fantasious write..i got caught in it...and lost myself...simply lovely.
On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, manywalks (747) wrote:

Such a soft and flowing piece of beauty.
On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, pessum ire animus (57) wrote:

im captivated by this. the first part.... amazing... great work.
On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, SourInnocence (13) wrote:

that was beautiful. i really enjoyed that. i think i have to add it as a fav.
On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, Aurora_Light (472) wrote:

hmm...i like this sad and yet it's not in a way (does that make any sence?) i hope u find her in ur dreams