I am scorpion

By unusual_blood

I am scorpion
poisoning your every thought
with words
you cannot ignore

I am scorpion
my hatred forming slowly
it is so obious
that it burns through your skull

I am scorpion
feeling your every
down my spine
sensing the cold
that so suddenly covers every inch
of your body
creating a blanket
of stinging ice

I am scorpion
Looking every bit the
of what you represent
I am
I am
I am
to the end
I can smell your weakness
your fear
i can see the
terror lurking
in your soft shy eyes
A deep darkness shades
the only light you ever
came to know
causing you to stumble
over every step you come upon

I am scorpion
Creeping in and out
of houses filled with
young sweet laughter
and haunted by ancient ghosts
still mourning in pain

I am scorpion
I cast an image
in your every thought
I haunt your
every dream

I am scorpion
I sting your innocent heart
I feel the blood
flowing in your

I am scorpion

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Copyright 2003 unusual_blood
Published on Saturday, December 6, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Darkest_Addiction On Sunday, January 15, 2006, Darkest_Addiction (45)By person wrote:

    i'll be honest this caught my eye because i am a scorpio but i enjoyed it and it made me think and i like that in a peice such as this

  • Kinkypoptart On Monday, May 9, 2005, Kinkypoptart (578)By person wrote:

    wow, wonderful write. ~*~TarT~*~

  • A former member wrote: This is amazing, brilliant description, I love it. ~Wish Upon A Star

  • Stranger On Thursday, December 11, 2003, Stranger (273)By person wrote:

    This is intense. I love the hammer pounding rhythm up until the final sting. I will read more from you.

  • SGT Bloth On Thursday, December 11, 2003, SGT Bloth (165)By person wrote:

    you came off to be very strong In this one....I like that trait. Awesome write...again...lol...Bloth

  • Midnight Phoenix On Saturday, December 6, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (243)By person wrote:

    You definately captured the negative traits of the scorpian. Your commanding tone gave this piece life beyond words. I'll have to mark this one up as a favorite. Being a scorpian, I found myself able to relate.

  • Raze Drake On Saturday, December 6, 2003, Raze Drake (86)By person wrote:

    hmmm....a great representation of the mystics behind the scorpian. A guardian animal.

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