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No More...
By Methos
If you ever call again you should know
that i'm not the man you once left behind
you twisted me with your vile words
and left me obsessed with your love
but my obsession only turned to desire
and my desire grew wings and lifted to pain
and pain fell deep within solitude
and solitude left me only with hatred
hatred spawned a thousand hells
and hell gave way to this nightmare
and this nightmare will be the end
of loving you...
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Copyright 2004 Methos
Published on Saturday, January 10, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
You have used a wonderful path from obsessed to nightmare the links along the way are very well done. A different structure I haven't seen before very well done
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A former member wrote:
I would love to say that I've never felt this way, but that would be a monstrous lie. It's a shame and a burden but we survive.
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A former member wrote:
Very beautiful. I can relate to the pain. This was so lovely I want to read it once more! Thank you for sharing.
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A former member wrote:
Nice poem. I shall read it again.
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On Thursday, November 16, 2006, HalfDarkAngel
(59)
wrote:
beautiful.
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On Saturday, March 19, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
wonderful flow -kitty
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On Thursday, March 10, 2005, -Oz-
(131) wrote:
alas, i've remembered why i bookmarked this more than a year ago....-Oz
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On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
I love that. So true
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On Saturday, February 28, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
My desire grew wings and lifted to pain, OMG I dont know what to say, I feel this and then some...I am again speechless.
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
i think all the other poets summed this one up, well done.~~~Grave
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, unusual_blood
(74) wrote:
i am speechless. Truly speechless. you really hit it home with this one. I ... I have no words. Let this silence be to you a sign of how well you can write, taking away and saying all the readers' thought and words.
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
great style and execution...emotional.....great job...-l-
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On Saturday, January 17, 2004, DeathSentance
(17) wrote:
very deep...there's a lot of thought in it...it's good
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On Thursday, January 15, 2004, -Oz-
(131) wrote:
WOW i love this.....~YeStErDaY~
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On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Drea
(1388) wrote:
so well done. just left me in awe. the flow pulls the reader in and just takes them on this journey. *favorite* ~Drea~
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On Saturday, January 10, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
Just fucking awsome Methos....you have been sneaking into my brain again...you little peeping tom....cause this is exactly the way I feel right now with the stuff i m going through...bravo
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On Saturday, January 10, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
clever and effective, and I agree with Monkey's 'powerful flow' point. purr
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On Saturday, January 10, 2004, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
Loves bitter end, if only one could just trun and walk away, ,,,O.
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On Saturday, January 10, 2004, birdwell
(138) wrote:
yes indeed, this was a great poem, it flow like water, and said so much with very little, perfect. ~db~
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On Saturday, January 10, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
this was straight forward.. and powerfull in the flow. I loved it.. Monkey
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