My Liege ...{Ravenous}

By A Velvet Tongue

Mmmm Yes...
right there..
slather this flesh
in pale honey
warmed milk
sweet and bubbling

of course
I will
turn over for you
allow your eyes
another taunting gaze
a taste of perfection

casual valleys
of desire
now under your liege
a sacrificial dusting
of spent honey
have another taste...

I love
the way
you move above me
claim me
as your priceless trophy
then christen me with lust

long legs
split ever wide
limber and diligent
mating with your darkness
a shaven peach
your ever tight nest..

aching nipples
salute you
pink promises of greed
an heretic's siege
my silken spine
arching high and proud

Baptise me
in the wake
of annointed tongues
bless me yet again
with feral rewards
spent, we lay singed

when orbs
catch yours
they lock in reverence
libidos dance
to trembling symphonies
avarice chains my thighs

your chest
rises and falls
in metered spasms
this I know is destiny
another round at hand
I am yours - only for tonight

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Published on Friday, January 9, 2004. Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"

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Comments on "My Liege ...{Ravenous}"

On Friday, February 15, 2019, ADevilParadigm (28) wrote:

Impressive. Images in my head are stirring. Very few are the works on lust and passion that actually catch my eye.. but this one. This one was delectable. Kudos!
A former member wrote: orgasmic. the imagery in this thing is extraordinary. my deepest compliments
On Tuesday, November 29, 2005, cherietree (21) wrote:

wow
On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388) wrote:

mmmm I agree with wonderland here. amazing imagery~ss
A former member wrote: *kisses the lady Vel's hand* Another lustful piece...well done.
A former member wrote: A very nice erotic write! I really enjoyed this. Bravo!!
On Wednesday, January 21, 2004, Cwn Annwn (91) wrote:

Nice write :) I like it! ~GoNe~
On Tuesday, January 13, 2004, Stranger (264) wrote:

Ever naughty in your intent, but almost courtly in your verse. Another tantalizing piece to leave us contented but always hungry for more.
On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

I agree with Old SouL, and in that I notice that I seem to agree on the a development that is ongoing. Everytime I am away from your writing, I seem to come back to be impressed. This poem seem to play alot with my imagination. Tiger
On Saturday, January 10, 2004, purr_verse (1059) wrote:

lovely, and dripping with your signature erotic splendour. i love the "feral rewards" turn of phrase in particular. :) purr
On Saturday, January 10, 2004, SGT Bloth (163) wrote:

Damn, I wish.....did I mention you were missed?....Bloth
On Saturday, January 10, 2004, OLd SouL (734) wrote:

I believe this is one of the better ones in your erotic collection. I liked it alot sweetie.. good to see you back. :::OLd
A former member wrote: My simple words: yummy yummy!
On Friday, January 9, 2004, urbanhumility (1175) wrote:

an alchemy of words, this desire is poetry incarnate! so very well done,my good friend............urban
On Friday, January 9, 2004, Alanarchy (1200) wrote:

"this I know is destiny another round at hand" Wow, Vel. That was Thrilling to say the least. VERY nice. Oh, BTW. I posted a pic of myself as Graphic art.
On Friday, January 9, 2004, Methos (121) wrote:

i agree...very provacative and ohhh so erotic...this is a favorite for sure...i love it..-Methos
On Friday, January 9, 2004, Drifter (268) wrote:

Cmon your killin me... i just TOOK a cold shower... **grumbles down the stairs**