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Carve
By Anybody_Killette
I was holding a knife,
some scissors and a pin,
and then i wondered,
If I could carve something within.
So i took the scissors,
and cut off some flesh,
removed my heart,
and started off fresh.
Took the pin,
and carved your name.
Now my heart,
will never be the same.
The pin didn't fulfill,
my every dream.
So i took the knife,
and started at the seam.
I carved your name,
on my heart,
now we will never,
have to be apart.
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Copyright 2004 Anybody_Killette
Published on Sunday, January 4, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Carve"
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A former member wrote:
Pretty.
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On Wednesday, May 31, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560)
wrote:
It had you grasping for air, the images swirled and were lovely and painted upon my eyelids. This was great ~nightly
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On Wednesday, May 31, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
This was beautiful, how you just hold onto someone by engraving them into your heart, that would be painful granted probably not being alive, but that's what gives it the air my mystery
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A former member wrote:
You are extremely expressive, youre a very great poem. I have read a lot of poetry, but you are in my top 5 for sure. i love the way you describe so much,, and you keep me reading that's for sure!
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On Saturday, June 19, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
Wow..this is so stunning..you are an amazing writer.
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On Sunday, January 4, 2004, Methos
(121) wrote:
Very intense...A great display of poetic talent. I love it! -Methos
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On Sunday, January 4, 2004, Drifter
(265) wrote:
Thats kind of a sick visual. LOVE IT!
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