the floor

By Johny_D_Lewis

cutting....ripping my flesh
watching the blood hit the floor
out of thought...out of mind
skinning myself slowing

wanting to be made again
freeing me...with the drops of blood
different from what i am
ripping...breaking this shell open

pulling...cutting off my hair
peices at a time
opening...freeing my blood
letting it drip to the floor

using knives...slicing
my hair falling from me
my claws grabbing...ripping
my skin hitting the floor

free me...free me from this cell
pull the flesh from the bones
help me get out...get away from me
free me to the floor...


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Copyright 2003 roachboyman
Published on Saturday, September 27, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • blue On Sunday, November 28, 2004, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    Transformation is never easy. I dig the changing tempo, quite appropriate. b.

  • Dayer On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    twisted writing

  • KittyStryker On Saturday, May 29, 2004, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    what i like about this is... it doesn't feel like the normal self mutilation poem. it's being trapped in a body that doesn't feel like yours... a feeling of displacement. not a death desire, but a need to be where you belong.

  • Midnight Phoenix On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    wow.. A bit morbid, yet fascinating. Shedding skin doesn't quite change the emotions on the inside, but it does provide a sick form of release. Nice write.

  • blackdarkness On Friday, October 31, 2003, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    gorey...very chilling....I love it...

  • A former member wrote: Shocking and sweet... vivid, visual and emotional. Makes me feel a way I've not felt in quite some time.

  • IceDragoness On Saturday, September 27, 2003, IceDragoness (193)By person wrote:

    definately gorey, the imagery is sick as hell

  • yslehc On Saturday, September 27, 2003, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    ahh i love this poem.. i feel like doing that so often its scary... thanks for sharing!

  • Drea On Saturday, September 27, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    well i dont think..i did feel a chill while reading this. i read it twice and now goin to read it again. wow..painful yet liberating.~Drea~

  • SilentStalker On Saturday, September 27, 2003, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...oh man, this is sick...and cool...how did you think this up...I think I felt a chill while reading this...good job, my friend... -Darun Scholar

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