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Rape Me
By A Velvet Tongue
Fuck Me
Hard
Deep
Rhythmic
Shackle Me
Bound
Broken
Helpless
Sodomize Me
Painful
Pleasurous
Degrading
Intoxicate Me
Addiction
Poison
Craving
Indulge Me
Slick
Breathless
Orgasmic
Rape Me
Blinded
Feral
Bloodied
-Just Promise Not To Speak-
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
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Copyright 2003 Beverly L Hernandez
Published on Thursday, July 3, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, October 3, 2019, flawofthepoet
(52)
wrote:
Wow. Lots of imagery and feelings in this one.
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A former member wrote:
This pulls me in every direction imaginable.
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On Tuesday, February 24, 2009, Nixx
(235) wrote:
oh i do miss the fun! :D
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A former member wrote:
thats good but you might wanna be careful im sure quite a few ppl were raped n might be ofended.
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A former member wrote:
like the way you used words and not sentences
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On Saturday, November 10, 2007, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
...always a prequalifier...
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A former member wrote:
*Props*
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On Friday, October 19, 2007, thelostmessenger
(110) wrote:
oo. yeahhh... -fave- *messenger
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A former member wrote:
i really do like this one, except..i don't get my kicks from getting raped, but otherwise it's all good.
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A former member wrote:
Hot damn. Right on Carlos.
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On Sunday, November 5, 2006, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Such beautiful debauchery. Fuck me raw, fuck me blue, fuck me hard, fuck me true. Write the fuck on..
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A former member wrote:
i like this one alot. ot speaks about things that people are often afraid to talk about. i love it!!! ~Corpse
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On Sunday, October 1, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
This was beautifully done. *fav*
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A former member wrote:
*clap* that was fucking great
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On Sunday, February 5, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
that last line is absolutely chilling. ~lauren~
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A former member wrote:
*grinz* becareful not only what you wish for but...how you wish for it >;) you might find someone that with just fuck your head and heart up and still have a little dick and not good in bed
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On Tuesday, January 3, 2006, dismal silence
(14) wrote:
oh damn, just awsome, intense, feeling every word of it
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On Wednesday, December 28, 2005, Shewolf
(25) wrote:
I love it,,,chill me, thrill me, fulfill me and then leave me the hell alone.....Shewolf
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On Tuesday, November 29, 2005, cherietree
(21) wrote:
i think this is amazing
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A former member wrote:
wow thats way deep
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A former member wrote:
remindes me
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A former member wrote:
Amazing
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A former member wrote:
dont worry i dont kiss and tell
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On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
"-Just Promise Not To Speak-" ... Amazing. Great peice :)
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_
(69) wrote:
Intense and raw and real. you are incredible!!!!
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On Saturday, April 9, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Oh I love this!
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On Tuesday, October 26, 2004, agentlemenspromise
(42) wrote:
you make rape sound beautiful
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On Thursday, September 2, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Excellent work. Perfect rhythm and word choice. This is a definite favorite.
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A former member wrote:
You describe it so wonderfully. I sugest you read my poem breaker of the innocent. it might strike a memory.
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On Thursday, June 3, 2004, WikidGrrl
(26) wrote:
very good...straight to the point and very clear...i love it!
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On Wednesday, May 5, 2004, Mischevious Princess
(28) wrote:
talk about blunt....and to the point
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On Monday, March 29, 2004, gracefullytorn
(61) wrote:
Honest and raw. Straight to the most prominant feelings of rape. Very provocative. Great piece.
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On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Dekika
(7) wrote:
This is really good, I don't know what else to say.
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On Thursday, March 4, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
I would have to agree, especvially when they say something the shouldnt have. Great work.
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On Monday, January 26, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
well all I can say is...Velvet, you'd change a good hetero girl like myself any day of the week. This is amazing. And, incidentally, am in total agreement with AlluringDecent. Brilliant. When my membership finally comes through this will be a fave for su
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On Monday, January 26, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
re. FF
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A former member wrote:
This is sensual and beautiful. I love this. It's nice to see writers who see sex for what it really is, something beautiful, not something to be hushed up and hidden. Great write hun.
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On Thursday, January 15, 2004, Tracer
(99) wrote:
I agree...descriptive, I liked it...I like poetry that isn't the norm...^vTracerv^
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On Monday, December 22, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
It's like you got into my brain...and found that little bitty corner of it that no one knows about...shhh...don't tell nobody, but mmmm....yup, this was good...~Delilah~
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On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
The few words you used highlighted the end. Dont speak. I promise I wont say a word.
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On Monday, November 24, 2003, spaniellie
(76) wrote:
awsome write, few words but its full of meaning.
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A former member wrote:
And you live.... where? I'm glad you were on tonight, otherwise I would not have found your work. You are now one of my favs.
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On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Loserland
(113) wrote:
yes the words Kurt should've wrote...what?.. nevermind...(pun intended)...deeply (!) satisfying as always
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A former member wrote:
An appalling end. Good Job.
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A former member wrote:
Not really much of a comment,but...wow..(Promise not to speak...great line)Dusky..xxx... (p.s.,i love that poem in ur profile(take this waltz)its beautiful
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
i agree with everything in this poem and eveything Alluring Descent said..whats with guys wanting to be all soft and delicate.shit just give it to me.. and like you said.. dont speak.. that ruins everything.. i LOVED THIS.. its goin in my favorites..~Drea
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A former member wrote:
promise not to speak...what a long way toward hidden emotions... really perfect. ***
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