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Rape Me
By A Velvet Tongue
Fuck Me
Hard
Deep
Rhythmic
Shackle Me
Bound
Broken
Helpless
Sodomize Me
Painful
Pleasurous
Degrading
Intoxicate Me
Addiction
Poison
Craving
Indulge Me
Slick
Breathless
Orgasmic
Rape Me
Blinded
Feral
Bloodied
-Just Promise Not To Speak-
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Copyright 2003 Beverly L Hernandez
Published on Thursday, July 3, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Rape Me"
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A former member wrote:
*blink* Oh. Oh my. *scurries away to do indecent things*
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A former member wrote:
You know what I don't get? Men who think women want it soft all the time. Half the time I don't want any fucking loving words. I want to be thrown against a wall, with my hands pinned down. Stupid fucking soft men. Grr...can you tell I have some pent
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A former member wrote:
up aggression? lol
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A former member wrote:
I enjoy the tempo, like a hard rape and an even harde orgasm
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On Monday, September 1, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434)
wrote:
Mmmmmmmm You knowwwwwww what I like!!
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A former member wrote:
Uhmmm hell yeah.........I ....uhmm love this damnit...
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On Thursday, July 31, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
Let is be known cre thinks rape isn't sexy and she is the spellchecker today! heh Thanks cre.,.you made me smile this morning...and I am very demented...Thanks again
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A former member wrote:
Fuck yah...mmmm yah...I have Nirvana stuck in my head though...corruptus
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On Sunday, July 27, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
O.K. I'll rape you. I'll even do it silently.
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On Thursday, July 31, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
ooo a man after my own wicked heart...heh
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
LOL! I was so into this poem. Taking it very serious and loving it...then I got to that end line and I cracked up! This could be taken both in a comical light and a seriously...both moods fit this great. I wonder which one you meant it to be? Hot...nicely
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On Tuesday, July 15, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
aight, all i can say in that friken intense, nice shitz :D, and the last line of the poem... pure friken genious good stuff :D *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Friday, July 18, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
So much can be heard, if we just learn to be silent..
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On Sunday, August 10, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
I agree that in silence much can be heard even the things we don't want to hear
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A former member wrote:
"Hard
Deep
Rhythmic" BREATHLESS; absolute, pure, velvet flesh burns in this poem. It hurts; it feels good. unbounded & chained. breathless...
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On Saturday, July 12, 2003, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
Ooohm...this is delicious..my desires wrapped into a tight, sexy, nifty little package hee hee...gorgeous bev, just gorgeous...
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A former member wrote:
OOOh lordy, so yummy!
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On Friday, July 4, 2003, gspot
(44) wrote:
YOu have found the wrong mouths. The best continue to speak of the wicked pleasures to come, or how much they enjoy taking you. Or they make you beg for what you are supposedly do not want.
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On Thursday, July 3, 2003, SeekingNirvana
(27) wrote:
i agree with fireinmyeyes. but it's not rape if you want it ^_^ -Sephiroth
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On Friday, July 4, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
Its rape to me If you take it!!
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A former member wrote:
Maybe it is if you want it but don't know when it's coming.... though... ah fuck it you're right Sephiroth
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On Saturday, July 5, 2003, SeekingNirvana
(27) wrote:
hahaha :)
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A former member wrote:
Nirvana
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A former member wrote:
Need you, Dream you, Find you, Taste you, Fuck you, Use you, Scar you, Break you. Lose me, Hate me, Smash me, Erase me. Kill Me, kILL, mE, kill me, KILL ME, kill ME, KILL me, KiLl Me, kIlL mE, KilL me, kILl ME, KIll Me, kiLL mE.
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A former member wrote:
My response to a kick ass poem. Anyways, you put your icq thing on the memberboard. i kinda added it to my contact thing. It'd be cool to talk to another disturbed poet.
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On Thursday, July 3, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Reminds me of my Do Me piece, but so much better pharsed. ~ mw
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On Thursday, July 3, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
yes! oh god yes... mmm... the fucking MEMORIES... and so many more to make. ::grins::
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A former member wrote:
Promise not to speak, i love that line, i wish i could say that to my girl half the time,,, provacative write, i loved it
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On Friday, July 4, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
Everything is great, until they open their fucking mouths? Why ruin it?..
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