(Night) wishes

By Forgotten Angel

(Night)Wishes fill up the (tear)stained sky,
(bloodless)people walk over my grave.

The razorblade flashes in the dark,
ready to be my knight in (dull) armor.

In my (hollow) dreams,
a soldier comes to save me.

Heaven leads me to hell,
to be alone for the rest of my (meaningless) life.

(Day)dreams carry me through the light,
and save me for the (night)wishes
that wrack my (hopeless) soul.

Wrathful fury fights my (nonexisiting) soldier,
for my marked body.

Seemingly oblivious,
I stand on the edge,
held back by an (in)visible source.

Flinging my arms out
an (anguished) plea escapes my lips.

"If there is a "God" above,
deliver me from this (disasterous) earth
that I'm forced to live in"

My (night) wishes fade into the distance,
fleeing to some better place,
where normal is all there is.


idk..this is just odd...i had an itch 2 write something..n this is what came out...i may b making changes, i may not b...but anway..yeah

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© 2005 kuro bara
Published on Thursday, December 29, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Johny_D_Lewis On Monday, February 6, 2006, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    i like this one, and i'll be your soldier *takes your hand*

  • A former member wrote: this work was awesome, very good, please don't change it

  • A former member wrote: I love the whole thing....but I must say, I really cant equate normalcy with what is better, but that's just me, (just call me abby-- abby normal) another lone soul. thanks!!

  • A former member wrote: this was awesome good work with this one ~~gap~~

  • A former member wrote: this was outstanding, kel. this piece truly shine. i don't think it needs changes. it's excellent. ♥

  • A poet of madness On Friday, December 30, 2005, A poet of madness (114)By person wrote:

    i think i like it... not sure why, but i think i like it... i may be inspired to write a new one cuz of this

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