Mask

By Thorn

I'll hide behind my mask
I'll pretend that I'm okay.
As I'm waiting for today to pass
I'll act like nothing's changed.

Nobody will see
I'll hide it all away.
I'll pretend that I'm the same old me
And lie another day.

Beautiful shards
Of broken young hearts
I'll hide the pain
Forget your name
And wait for better days.

As you depart
My world falls apart
I'll fight the past behind my mask
And try for a fresh start.

I'll hide behind my mask
And pretend that I'm okay.
I'll look for comfort in this flask
As I tell you nothing's changed.

You will never see
I'll hide it all inside.
You'll never know what's wrong with me
Or see the tears I cry.

Beautiful shards
Of broken young hearts
I'll hide the pain
Forget your name
And wait for better days.

As you depart
My world falls apart
I'll fight the past behind my mask
And try for a fresh start.



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© 2005 Thorn
Published on Sunday, October 23, 2005.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • Nimue44 On Monday, January 5, 2015, Nimue44 (289)By person wrote:

    This was... haunting pace. Masterful topic. brava!

  • A former member wrote: Amazing!!! I love it. The word them self flow into a beautiful sad story in my mind.

  • M Morgan On Saturday, January 26, 2013, M Morgan (198)By person wrote:

    Ah! Poet, that is not the end!!! Fabulous!

  • Tartis Flammis On Saturday, January 26, 2013, Tartis Flammis (14)By person wrote:

    This has EVERYTHING that I want to say in it.....Lovely....just Lovely. Thanks a lot. :)

  • A former member wrote: Lovely sad poem.

  • Nail Bunny On Saturday, April 29, 2006, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    It is still so hauntingly fabulously painfuly perfect...

  • D3ADT0WN On Monday, February 20, 2006, D3ADT0WN (185)By person wrote:

    Wow...This is great good job

  • cherietree On Tuesday, January 10, 2006, cherietree (21)By person wrote:

    i love this poem its like simplenes mixed with deph in a strange beautiful way

  • A former member wrote: Ow....oo ouch the truth can certainly sting....

  • A former member wrote: i thought i had left a comment...guess not...anyway, awesome piece..u kno i'm here for u ^_^

  • Philla On Friday, November 11, 2005, Philla (95)By person wrote:

    Oh I'm in love with this! Such a lovely flow and the words came together to form the most beuatiful picture. Oh such beauty and talent... -*Philla*-

  • A former member wrote: this is beautiful....i really like it....i think its one of your best....or close to it.....

  • suicidalsecrecy On Wednesday, November 2, 2005, suicidalsecrecy (42)By person wrote:

    amazing. love it. absolutely beautiful write. excellent work, my friend. captures an intensity of emotion that i too have felt. if you ever need to talk just dp mail me, eh? peace and love. ~s.s.

  • Army Barbie On Monday, October 31, 2005, Army Barbie (316)By person wrote:

    You're amazing, hot stuff. You need me I'm here. (I said it cause Nail Bunny said you're probably tired of hearing it.) But no, seriously. I'm here. -Courtney

  • Nail Bunny On Monday, October 31, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    Wow, I called this right the first time through... this is epic, amazing. you're probably tired of hearing this, but i'm here for you, specially since you've been there for me so many times.

  • Nail Bunny On Monday, October 31, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    this piece is absolutely terrific, spectacular, fabulous, etc. pick a positive adjective, it fits.

  • vaultgrl On Tuesday, October 25, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    *speachless, second

  • vaultgrl On Tuesday, October 25, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    ...wow.....I'm more speaachless then before...it's so extraordinary that this got better the seconf time around....i couldn't find any reason for the first one to need more, until i read this......and, i agree with kuro....as hard as it may be, we are all

  • vaultgrl On Tuesday, October 25, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    we are all here for you and if you decide to, you know there are many ears here ready for you.....this is more beautifully painful then the first....great write....

  • Thorn On Tuesday, October 25, 2005, Thorn (282)By person wrote:

    ... I don't know what to say... Thank you so much, Kel...

  • Forgotten Angel On Tuesday, October 25, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    but in the long run..its harder, on you..and the ones who love you... but if you really think you need to..then go ahead and hide behind the mask, everybody'll still be here for you, no matter what..because we love you -Kel

  • Forgotten Angel On Tuesday, October 25, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    oh Thorn hun..dont hide behind a mask..its okay to show pain..and we're here for you..because we all love you..and you dont need to hide behind a mask..although i can relate to this poem...and i kno sometimes its easier to hide behind a mask..but in the l

  • Thorn On Tuesday, October 25, 2005, Thorn (282)By person wrote:

    Just finished and reposted it.

  • A former member wrote: cant wait to hear the rest....sounds real good.....

  • A former member wrote: yes, this is very good! i want to hear more!! *starts acting like a lil kid that wants that really cool toy*

  • Nail Bunny On Monday, October 24, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    I think its great. you gotta finish this, i can sense epic-ness.

  • Aethelwyne On Sunday, October 23, 2005, Aethelwyne (51)By person wrote:

    imsorry you fell so hard. Ill could lend you a hand to help you back up tho. im always here.

  • Philla On Sunday, October 23, 2005, Philla (95)By person wrote:

    I think it's beautiful! DP mail me when you finish it please. If this is only the unfinished result, I can't wait to read the final product! -*Philla*-

  • vaultgrl On Sunday, October 23, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    .....of course it's good!!!!!....you gotta finish a second verse...i loved it.....i relate all too well.....it's so....so....hmmm....beautifully painful.....great write.....

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