Crimson Rain
By Aethelwyne
walking alone
down a dark little street
rain falling gently
at her feet
shes completely lost
though she knows where she is
her life pouring crimson
down from her wrist
she remembers your smile
she sees your face
and has all of these memories
she cannot erase
she's been trying so hard
to leave her past behind
to finally move on
to put you out of her mind
but your kiss she still tastes
and your laughter she still hears
and as her hair blows across her cheek
the rain mingles with her tears
exhausted and fading
she surrenders to pain
and as darkness envelopes her
she watches you dance in the rain
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Copyright 2005 Aethelwyne
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On Saturday, March 3, 2007, the dried flower
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love it....
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On Monday, July 3, 2006, Lythodaemil
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Amazing
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A former member wrote:
dancing in the rain rules.
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On Thursday, January 5, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Love, love, love.
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On Monday, August 29, 2005, Cutting_for_Freedom
(34) wrote:
This I thought was wonderful and touched me deeply, Nicely done.
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On Tuesday, August 9, 2005, Grey Lies
(186) wrote:
lovely...
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On Wednesday, July 27, 2005, InquisitiveSpirit
(10) wrote:
Wow, with a simple writting style you deliver an intense feeling through you writting, good work, I loved it.
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A former member wrote:
this is a good write.....glad i read it
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On Sunday, June 26, 2005, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
I really like this. probably the most powerfull I have read.
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On Wednesday, June 22, 2005, Thorn
(283) wrote:
This is by far one of your best.
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On Friday, May 27, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
This is truly beautiful. Welcome to DP :)
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On Friday, May 27, 2005, a_deception_unto_myself
(15) wrote:
I really enjoyed reading this poem.
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On Friday, May 27, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood
(38) wrote:
I really like this one good job