let me bare your pain...
By Sin
let me bare your pain
tonight
and take away your tears
because the sadness in your eyes
weighs heavy on my soul
~*~
see yourself through my eyes
and know your worth
~*~
let me bestow upon you
the compassion that our god lacks
give you wings
so you can soar
and return to the sky where you belong
~*~
ill carry your cross
to ease your heavy burden
if youd only let me
~*~
so let go of all those past tragedies
and have faith in me
~*~
my love may be flawed
but it will never falter
and i feel your every injury as if it were my own
and every tear you cry
is multiplied in my eyes a hundred times over
and every time your broken heart beats in pain
another of my scars cracks open
~*~
so let your blood be not shed
and cry no more
~*~
let me bare your pain
after all
what are friends for
~*~
Comments on "let me bare your pain..."
-
A former member wrote:
to be able to bear the pain of the friend you love.. to take away the burdens that weigh heavy on their shoulders, and make them your very own..
this is incredibly well written, and beautiful too I might add...
-
On Wednesday, June 13, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
I know the feelings. You're an angel.
-
On Monday, March 19, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
*melts* This was so good I was checking to make sure you weren't plagiarising *melts again*
-
On Thursday, February 22, 2018, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
On my faves list this goes!
-
On Tuesday, March 13, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
one of my favorite works of yours
-
On Monday, January 22, 2007, denver nitze
(251) wrote:
wow. i feel almost as if you stole the words from my mind on this one. this is beautiful.
-
A former member wrote:
very penetrating!!! i love it!!
-
A former member wrote:
this is awesome...sadly, i could never write like this...
-
On Tuesday, September 27, 2005, Thorn
(282) wrote:
Oh, that is soo precious. I love this poem.
-
On Monday, May 30, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Perfection. Everyone should read this and understand this.
-
On Sunday, May 29, 2005, Labitina
(37) wrote:
This is perfect, you took the words strait from me, I feel the same way about someone, this was beautiful~ Christina
-
On Monday, May 23, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
Wow this is amazing. A friend of mine has kind of said this very thing to me. Beautiful write. wonderful job. ~Unlucky
-
On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
Oh how I would love to be able to bare the pain of so many I care about. I truly know of you feel and you expressed it way better than I ever could. This was beautiful. -Dan
-
On Saturday, April 9, 2005, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Almost too beautiful to be true. Lovely write
-
On Friday, April 8, 2005, darkleprechaun
(56) wrote:
wish i had a friend like that.... but would wish the bearing of my pain on no man or woman... for it's almost too much for me.... guess that's why i have not such friends.... dave thanx for the write kristy i truely enjoyed it
-
A former member wrote:
*hugs ya tight* luv ya kristy