In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)
By Mathesix
Created Holy, untouched
by the sins of man, a fresh bloom awakens
Beneath the eyes of Heaven, a creature allowed no worship
Touching the skies, to rearrange the stars in a prayer
She unfurls her wings of six to soar
As a caretaker
As a cleanser
One Hundred and ninety-six times referred, again the same forgotten
Intended for a purpose, slid beneath the covering clouds
Unobtrusive, yet divine in nature
She wreathes herself in flames
As a watcher
As a way finder
Messanger of miracles, Hast thou come in peace?
To render judgement, or to augment a cause?
In reverence, I subjagate myself to your whims
She smiles a forgotten secret
As a reminder
As a recourse
The host to guide into warfare, of the spiritual measure
Chronicler of the heart of mine empire
A beauty refreshed through the decline of time
she beckons a call to arms
As a paradigm
As a pleasure
Bathed in possession, enthralled by perfection
Myriad futures revealed, myriad pasts lived
The knowledge of having Existed
She unfolds a plan for redemption
As a helper
As a heroine
Tribulation of hearts and minds, She speaks through the Metatron
"To worship me is forbidden, I disdain false idalotry
Away from your knees, I shall permit one kiss."
She sensually lifts my face
As a grace
As a goddess
Awakened from memories persisted, awakened from reverie
The dawning of realization, transistion from falsehoods
An aura of clairvoyance white
She trembles from the mortal touch
As a lore
As a lover
Oblivion sinks towards a spiral of darkness, created by one unnamed
The covenants broken in a tryst of faith
The seraph cast into the fiery lake
She defiantly casts her gaze
As a free angel
As a fallen one
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Comments on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)"
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On Monday, March 12, 2018, I IS ME
(380) wrote:
Red hot yet ice cold as beautiful as pain can be. I love it
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A former member wrote:
an enchanting story, the idea of giving in to human temptation, which is not necessarily a sinful act, it is natural and beautiful and passionate.
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On Monday, June 19, 2006, Mathesix
(40) wrote:
The worship of angels is a sinful act, tough. They were created to be more than man, yet still in service of god. her 'sin' was in allowing the worship
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On Tuesday, June 20, 2006, dp_whipping_girl
(234) wrote:
only actually a sinful act if one believes in God, angels and sin; possibly percieved as though, through mythological means by a complete unbeliever too. but the passion of this observation would fool me if the latter.~pf
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On Tuesday, June 20, 2006, dp_whipping_girl
(234) wrote:
hahaha that last comment was number 666, as i speak of God, angels and sin! oh irony! ~pf
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On Monday, June 19, 2006, dp_whipping_girl
(234) wrote:
exactly what makes it so different than just a bunch of pretty words arranged nicely on a page...it gets inside the old brain and makes you think, a true delight! a naughty angel! what more can i ask for!!
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A former member wrote:
and the worship of any figure/symbol, or any one being with complete power over man is condemned, though sometimes I see human indulgence as fundamental and unchangeable.. this piece has a compelling message.
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On Monday, June 19, 2006, dp_whipping_girl
(234) wrote:
this whole thing keeps making me think of Tori Amos' "Bliss": "...made of you, but not enough for you" which is something i have yet to figure out, so this is a scruptious catalyst for something already of interest to me! ~pf
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A former member wrote:
Yes...you MUST post the next two...I've been left grasping at stones, even as I understand that to read just one more piece of beauty as brilliant as this will crash me to my knees...this is GORGEOUSLY perfect! I gotta fave it. ~*Beth*~
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On Sunday, June 18, 2006, Forgotten Angel
(309) wrote:
its unfinished? are you kidding? its perfect...please do post the other two.i'd LOVE to read them..this is just stunning...i admire your poetry now, as well as your taste in music..i like you already! but, excellent write..cant wait for the others! -Kel