Fallen Angel

By rainbowgoth

To you she is beautiful
She is everything you ever wanted
She's perfect
Only in your eyes
Can't you see
Your angel has fallen
Deep inside she screams and cries
She tries not to show you
She tries to hide the pain
She loves you more than you will ever know
And she needs you
Now more than ever
So go to your angel
Hold her close
Keep her safe
And wipe the tears from her eyes

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© 2006 rainbowgoth
Published on Saturday, August 5, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Wednesday, December 9, 2020, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    So romantic. This has made me think of my mistakes in relationships. You have a gift. Thank you for sharing and congrats on poem of the day. :)

  • DarkLord On Monday, February 26, 2007, DarkLord (7)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful, such a lovely piece...

  • beautifulfallenangel On Monday, October 30, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (62)By person wrote:

    :)......WE all need someone, whether we admit it or not

  • Nimue44 On Monday, January 5, 2015, Nimue44 (289)By person wrote:

    Yes, I agree. This is beautifully honest.

  • Cattarax On Saturday, August 5, 2006, Cattarax (210)By person wrote:

    .... amazing :) heart felt ..~T~

  • Forgotten Angel On Saturday, August 5, 2006, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    this is amazing..this is everything i've ever wanted to write..hope you dont mind if i fave it.. this is amazing..and like g said, perfect! -Kel

  • A former member wrote: so perfect.

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