I Don't Want To Wake

By BlackRobedMage

Here I lie waiting to die
Lost inside a heart so cold
My darkest fear has come to life
And no one can save my soul




Inside of my mind
Where no one can reach me
Away from my pain
And sorrow so unreal

Feelings seem so hollow
Forever falling down
Into my own darkness
A soul that cannot feel



I don't want to wake from dreams
(so far away)
I want to stay inside myself
(where I am safe)
So please don't let me wake
(To face reality)
I want to be safe inside of me




In my dark reprieve
I lie and wait so still
Light cannot be found
Shadows seem to hide

Lost in my soul
Where rain drops whisper
And wind faintly breaths
Whispering to me




I don't want to wake from dreams
(so far away)
I want to stay inside myself
(where I am safe)
So please don't let me wake
(To face reality)
I want to be safe inside of me


And when I fall asleep again I can be free
Away from all the pain and lies
No longer will I face the day with a broken heart
No longer can you see sorrow in shadowed eyes


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Copyright 2003 BlackRobedMage
Published on Wednesday, November 12, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Nimue44 On Monday, January 5, 2015, Nimue44 (296)By person wrote:

    I-I relate, indeed. Imaginary worlds are far beyond everything wie'll ever understand. Reality is overrated, dreams are the chants of minds freed... Brava!

  • Musik2MyEyes On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (193)By person wrote:

    Congrats on Poem of the Day. This is an excellent piece. There are going to be SO many people that can relate to this. It is written in such a way to be lyrical...would be a good song =)

  • ToxicLove On Sunday, February 21, 2010, ToxicLove (39)By person wrote:

    very good write, I enjoyed the flow of your words and could not agree more about staying inside myself where I am safe... write on... ~ToxicLove~

  • A former member wrote: I like this poem a lot. It is beautiful. I had a dream last night that was oh so wonderful and then I woke up and all hope was shattered by reality ... I too wish to live in my dreams were everything is okay.

  • Beautiful Scars On Monday, June 21, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    Wow..This is beatifull..great wrte.. ..::Fairy::...

  • Lifeless On Monday, June 21, 2004, Lifeless (39)By person wrote:

    Nice write. I can empathize.

  • NikesRain On Friday, June 4, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    love reading this...must be at least 6 times now. NR

  • A former member wrote: i know how you feel. i never want to leave my dreams either. i wish i never had to. its so much better then living my real life.

  • BleedSilver On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    Great write...*Adds to fave list*

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