I Don't Want To Wake
By BlackRobedMage
Here I lie waiting to die
Lost inside a heart so cold
My darkest fear has come to life
And no one can save my soul
Inside of my mind
Where no one can reach me
Away from my pain
And sorrow so unreal
Feelings seem so hollow
Forever falling down
Into my own darkness
A soul that cannot feel
I don't want to wake from dreams
(so far away)
I want to stay inside myself
(where I am safe)
So please don't let me wake
(To face reality)
I want to be safe inside of me
In my dark reprieve
I lie and wait so still
Light cannot be found
Shadows seem to hide
Lost in my soul
Where rain drops whisper
And wind faintly breaths
Whispering to me
I don't want to wake from dreams
(so far away)
I want to stay inside myself
(where I am safe)
So please don't let me wake
(To face reality)
I want to be safe inside of me
And when I fall asleep again I can be free
Away from all the pain and lies
No longer will I face the day with a broken heart
No longer can you see sorrow in shadowed eyes
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Comments on "I Don't Want To Wake"
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On Monday, January 5, 2015, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
I-I relate, indeed. Imaginary worlds are far beyond everything wie'll ever understand. Reality is overrated, dreams are the chants of minds freed... Brava!
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On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(192) wrote:
Congrats on Poem of the Day. This is an excellent piece. There are going to be SO many people that can relate to this. It is written in such a way to be lyrical...would be a good song =)
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On Sunday, February 21, 2010, ToxicLove
(37) wrote:
very good write, I enjoyed the flow of your words and could not agree more about staying inside myself where I am safe... write on... ~ToxicLove~
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A former member wrote:
I like this poem a lot. It is beautiful. I had a dream last night that was oh so wonderful and then I woke up and all hope was shattered by reality ... I too wish to live in my dreams were everything is okay.
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On Monday, June 21, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
Wow..This is beatifull..great wrte.. ..::Fairy::...
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On Monday, June 21, 2004, Lifeless
(38) wrote:
Nice write. I can empathize.
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On Friday, June 4, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
love reading this...must be at least 6 times now. NR
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A former member wrote:
i know how you feel. i never want to leave my dreams either. i wish i never had to. its so much better then living my real life.
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
Great write...*Adds to fave list*