She Holds Out Her Heart
By TornPaperDoll
She holds out her heart
It drips on her shoe,
Her eyes tell so much,
Of the guilt and rue
Of the somber nights
Of the tainted dreams
When she covers her ears,
So she won’t hear the screams.
She holds out her heart
Her fingers unsure
Whether to be gentle
Or as vile as it were
Her hands they shake,
As she offers it all,
The weight becomes unbarring,
As she lets it fall.
She holds out her tongue
In disgust of the matter,
That lies on the floor
Staring back at her
In her petite little voice
Lacking anything old,
She turns away quite roughly
“Next is my soul…”
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Copyright 2003 TornPaperDoll
Published on Monday, December 29, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, December 24, 2007, Anybody_Killette
(47) wrote:
I think.. no matter how much you write.. This will ALWAYS be my favorite.. =]
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On Tuesday, October 3, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
it reminds me so much of the past.. sometimes its hard to let go, and then you want back something you can never have.. great write
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A former member wrote:
i'm back here reading this and i find that i have found more to it than i did the first time i came...this is...it's extremely beatiful...ionno, i just understand better..even maybe more than what i would like to
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A former member wrote:
this hit me hard...i definetely didn't expect the ending... ouch!!!
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A former member wrote:
wow..this is my type of stuff...adding it..i like to mention that kind of stuff..this is good
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A former member wrote:
Oh...youch. This ripped into me.
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
Wow, so amazing and so powerful, there really isn't words to express how good this is, great job :) ~Emptyness~
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On Wednesday, July 21, 2004, Deadly Embrace
(41) wrote:
This one hit me hard. ::puts on favorites:: amazing write. -DE
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On Wednesday, March 3, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
"Next is my soul" Girl you rock. I would like to see a sequel to this one, I hope you have one planned.
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On Thursday, January 1, 2004, Anybody_Killette
(47) wrote:
I can't help but read this over and over.. I love it so much LoL
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A former member wrote:
i agree, i like it too
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On Monday, December 29, 2003, Anybody_Killette
(47) wrote:
I really.. really.. like this