I Wish, I'll Be
By darkness_descends
I wish I could take all the pain from your heart,
Or stop it before it starts.
I wish I could dry all your tears,
Do away with all your fears.
I wish I could wipe the frown from your face,
Put a smile in it's place.
I wish I could tell you what's in your future,
Let you see it in a crystal ball so you know it's for sure.
I wish I could defy time and distance,
If only to be with you for one perfect instance.
I wish I could wrap you in my arms,
Keep you shielded from all harm...
I wish you could love you,
As much as I do.
I'll be your strength when you are weak,
And your voice when you can not speak.
I'll be your heart,
When you're falling apart.
I'll be the stars that shine above,
Overcome hate when you need love.
I'll be your chameleon,
Your crutch to lean on.
All these things I will be...
If you'll let me
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Comments on "I Wish, I'll Be"
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A former member wrote:
This is an amazing piece of work, the way you worked the words is splendid. Very beautiful, one of my favorites.
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A former member wrote:
Absolutely, positively amazing. It is perfect. that's all that needs to be said.
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A former member wrote:
This is so beautiful... Stunning.
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A former member wrote:
Amazingly beautiful.
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On Thursday, January 5, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Beautiful! Congrats on POD.. Much deserved...
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A former member wrote:
omg l luv it...it says exactly how i feel right now
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A former member wrote:
this was wounderful...
wish could write lika that.
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
This is beautiful. Wonderfully written. ~Unlucky
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, etarnally damnd
(61) wrote:
great write i know just how u feel-michael
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On Monday, May 5, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
stunning words... the girl you wrote this for is very lucky to have you
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
I AM LUCKY BEYOND WHAT WORDS CAN DESCRIBE. Just reading oldies...missing you. love you...see you soon. mauh ~gothic~
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A former member wrote:
i absolutely love this poem! its so adorably cute! nice work!