There can only be one

By Mistress Morbid

One mind
One heart
One soul
They cannot be replaced

One me
One you
One love
That has to be genuine

One desire
One intent
One expectation
All I see is you

One flustered mind
One shattered heart
One broken soul

All I had
You folded into origami
And destroyed them
Like helpless little children

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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Saturday, March 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, May 1, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Great write. Love the ending. ~*~Tart~*~

  • A former member wrote: great work, loved the conclusion.

  • Mistress Morbid On Thursday, March 11, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Thank you Thank you Thank you!

  • PointlessX On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, PointlessX (36)By person wrote:

    "..One flustered mind, One shattered heart, One broken soul.."--One great poem--PointlessX

  • Stranger On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, Stranger (263)By person wrote:

    One word: Excellent!!!

  • purr_verse On Saturday, March 6, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    a so melancholic piece... the 'origami' line is great: lovely original imagery. :)

  • Mistress Morbid On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Oh thank you soo much, your a wonderful writer yourself

  • hopeless On Saturday, March 6, 2004, hopeless (51)By person wrote:

    wooah this was good... ~hopeless

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