4/10
By liquid_emotion
I want to remember you
Without getting lost in the past
Daydreaming of things that cannot be
A love I won’t outlast
And I have moved on
But not yet gotten so far ahead
That I can’t see you there behind me
Or hear words you said
Seeing you sporadically
Throughout the years since
And so little has changed in my love
A softened presence
I miss my best friend
A lover that held me in tenderness
And the youth that I associate you with
The years of innocence
I can no longer give
The passion and adoration
That I first had when love was new
A heightened sensation
Am I still holding on
Forever true to a memory
Continuing to resurface time and again
So faithful internally
Or am I afraid
To loose myself over again
Deep inside of someone else’s soul
Hesitating from within
I know it is both
And I am still finding it hard
Within this forever lingering warmth
And the heart I guard
Awards
Comments on "4/10"
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On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
Im speechless, breathless, this was...beauitfully written. -kitty
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On Thursday, November 18, 2004, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
that was just beautiful... revealing and tender. I felt many facets of this. Wonderful job. :::OLd
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A former member wrote:
This is beautiful, and so very true.. Excellent Write.
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
wow. wow. wow. my feelings exactly. great job.
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A former member wrote:
this is lovely...I love your eyes.and if your not urs then I love the eyes
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On Sunday, September 14, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
oh yes, quite mine;)
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
You can tell that you are really looking deep inside yourself and asking difficult questions. It is a hard place to remain objective. But it sounds like you are. And turning your thoughts into beautiful words at the same time.
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On Monday, April 28, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
what a pleasent little piece .... and holy shit .. you have eyes ;) .. as always, wonderful poetry
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On Monday, April 28, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
all the better to see you with
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On Monday, April 28, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
through your beautiful words, i feel like i am not the only one with such memory and "feel" for love, i must thank you liquid......your words comfort me.....urban.....
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On Monday, April 28, 2003, shadowsinthelight
(146) wrote:
The first scar, I can relate, but what do you imagine his memories to be? S.
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On Monday, April 28, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
I soppose I would hope them to be similar, although less heartbreaking.
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On Monday, April 28, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
such eccsatic fear... a bleeding heart doesn't know whether to run to or from love... wonderful write.
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On Sunday, April 27, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
hmm this brings me memories kept warmly forever but still so afraid to recall...nice one.