Forever a Secret

By Midnight Phoenix

When you dream do you look up at the sky
And watch the clouds pass you by
And soon you find yourself with nothing

Are your barefeet lifted from the grass
Can you feel the wind slip passed
Maybe this is the end of everything

But how would you ever know
If it's a sign or some strange secret
That is trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you

And would you care to find out
Is there a deeper meaning
That it's trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you

When you awake do you look up at the wall
As if there is nothing there at all
And soon you find yourself at an ending

Does your heart beat pause and then drum fast
Would you tell me if I asked
I'm hoping this is the beginning

But how would you ever know
If it's a sign or some strange secret
That is trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you

And would you care to find out
Is there a deeper meaning
That it's trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you to go

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Copyright 2003 little nemo
Published on Sunday, May 11, 2003.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • Rebel_Angel On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I LIKE!

  • OLd SouL On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    GREAT write. I freakin' love your style.

  • A former member wrote: it's....wow....great stuff.

  • A former member wrote: I would like to hear this piece to music, loud music perhaps, good stuff dude, keep it up, you make me wish I could find the words to express things the way that you do.

  • A former member wrote: I can't even find the words....I love it!

  • Armand On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, Armand (54)By person wrote:

    spoiling your readers with your usual free flowing, memorable images. i expect that your music will be remembered for its quotable lyrics. please correct the spelling to "secret" - the only blemish on an otherwise beautiful piece.

  • diavolessa On Monday, May 12, 2003, diavolessa (207)By person wrote:

    bravo. I find it to be trully amazing and full of genuine feelings! I like it muchly!

  • A former member wrote: wow that is truley amazing and inspiring. awsome job

  • urbanhumility On Monday, May 12, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    a beautiful and internal piece, well written.................urban

  • maddin foxxxy On Monday, May 12, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    this is my favorite from you...seems like a damn good lyric-poem....congrats on the magnificent write!

  • A former member wrote: This poem is amamzing! I really like it! Good Job!!

  • blackdarkness On Sunday, May 11, 2003, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    wow this left me speachless for a while...i loved it good write

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