Forever a Secret
By Midnight Phoenix
When you dream do you look up at the sky
And watch the clouds pass you by
And soon you find yourself with nothing
Are your barefeet lifted from the grass
Can you feel the wind slip passed
Maybe this is the end of everything
But how would you ever know
If it's a sign or some strange secret
That is trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you
And would you care to find out
Is there a deeper meaning
That it's trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you
When you awake do you look up at the wall
As if there is nothing there at all
And soon you find yourself at an ending
Does your heart beat pause and then drum fast
Would you tell me if I asked
I'm hoping this is the beginning
But how would you ever know
If it's a sign or some strange secret
That is trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you
And would you care to find out
Is there a deeper meaning
That it's trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you to go
Comments on "Forever a Secret"
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I LIKE!
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On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
GREAT write. I freakin' love your style.
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A former member wrote:
it's....wow....great stuff.
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A former member wrote:
I would like to hear this piece to music, loud music perhaps, good stuff dude, keep it up, you make me wish I could find the words to express things the way that you do.
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A former member wrote:
I can't even find the words....I love it!
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On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, Armand
(54) wrote:
spoiling your readers with your usual free flowing, memorable images. i expect that your music will be remembered for its quotable lyrics. please correct the spelling to "secret" - the only blemish on an otherwise beautiful piece.
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On Monday, May 12, 2003, diavolessa
(207) wrote:
bravo. I find it to be trully amazing and full of genuine feelings! I like it muchly!
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A former member wrote:
wow that is truley amazing and inspiring. awsome job
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On Monday, May 12, 2003, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
a beautiful and internal piece, well written.................urban
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On Monday, May 12, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
this is my favorite from you...seems like a damn good lyric-poem....congrats on the magnificent write!
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A former member wrote:
This poem is amamzing! I really like it! Good Job!!
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On Sunday, May 11, 2003, blackdarkness
(227) wrote:
wow this left me speachless for a while...i loved it good write