Life and Death

By Aurora_Light

long or short
sweet or bitter
hell or heaven
it's dark to me
it's up to you
to find your place

sweet and peacefull
long and endless
the light in the dark
it's not my time yet

bright and perfect
complet and yet not
why does it always hide the truth?

black and loving
surrounding my soul
showing to all the truth inside

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Copyright 2003 Amanda L. Mrozinski
Published on Saturday, June 28, 2003.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: It's a great poem! Really well written and hits the soul. Keep up the writing! =)

  • Juliette_CRF On Friday, April 13, 2012, Juliette_CRF (10)By person wrote:

    This is just breathtaking writing.

  • Artanis On Monday, December 20, 2010, Artanis (59)By person wrote:

    good descriptions on all that we live and die for.

  • smearedXmakeup On Thursday, May 26, 2005, smearedXmakeup (19)By person wrote:

    I like how you show the light hiding the truth, and the dark revealing it. i like it.

  • A former member wrote: ...I don't understand how you fit all your thoughts into this site, i have like SHIT for works and all my space iz takin up... i guess shit splatters

  • The Fallen Angel On Monday, August 11, 2003, The Fallen Angel (245)By person wrote:

    Heeeyy! This is nice! Your assessment on light and dark is an eye opener

  • Abbyernathie On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    this one is kewl. i really like it. but then again i like all yer

  • Midnight Phoenix On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (243)By person wrote:

    I felt this to be a fun piece of quick summary poems held in each stanza. The only suggestion I have is to see you write this through equal eyes. Point out some good in Life and Light and bad in Death and Dark. Create a balance. Just a little thought :)

  • Kittichoo On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, Kittichoo (37)By person wrote:

    From the comparison from life and death to living... to the comparisson from light and dark to thinking... Beautiful!!!

  • Blood of Winter On Thursday, July 31, 2003, Blood of Winter (300)By person wrote:

    Beautifully done, love the themes and message.

  • A former member wrote: God every one of your poems that i have read are great. you are a one of a kind poet

  • CharlottesWeb On Wednesday, July 2, 2003, CharlottesWeb (521)By person wrote:

    I like this. Like crystal perfectly cut to show the flaws in the making. Facts and flaunts´┐Ż.nice one.~DW~

  • Blinded_Tiger On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (532)By person wrote:

    I totaly agree with DeathsWhisper.

  • Stranger On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, Stranger (273)By person wrote:

    I got a chill at the end of this one. Thank you. I love it when that happens.

  • maddin foxxxy On Saturday, June 28, 2003, maddin foxxxy (362)By person wrote:

    life and dead..great perception..helped me more..thanks..loved this one 2!

  • A former member wrote: yes nice one aurora i really enjoyed this piece kefka needs to see this

  • Aurora_Light On Sunday, June 29, 2003, Aurora_Light (482)By person wrote:

    why does boredom affect my works so?

  • Rebel_Angel On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, Rebel_Angel (328)By person wrote:

    cuz it is your subconcious I like this peace too! (but I like a lot of ur stuff tut tut).

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