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From Deep Inside
By Scarrzz
Claws reach Down
Down my Throat
Rending my Heart
Ripping my Lungs
From my Body
While I Retch
Calling your Name
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© 2008 Scarrzz
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On Tuesday, June 30, 2009, zhade and shanea
(14)
wrote:
i love it! calm yet scary at the same time.
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A former member wrote:
nothing says love like vomit... but really, I got this sense of a love that is soo deep, so much a part of the speaker, that it is painful... that removal is physical and deadly. nice.
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On Monday, September 9, 2013, The Dybbuk
(895) wrote:
haha, what this member murmured... this sickness unto love... such that it would rather wretch than die.... :)
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A former member wrote:
ouch. yeah i could go for a smoke w/ this one. and some refective time. good write H.R
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A former member wrote:
good simple write, sounds almost like cigerettes.
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On Friday, July 18, 2008, Scarrzz
(235) wrote:
Thanks, but I have never taken a single drag. I didn't think of it that way, but that's the cool thing about poetry and perspective. We all see things from our own vantage point. ( pun intended, Isn't there a brand of cigs called Vantage ?) - I'm afraid that all I can focus on is the soul-rending effects of lost love, which coincidentally, I have oft described as a cancer of the spirit.
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