In Vain

By Scarrzz

A work inspired by Across the Empty Sky

Can’t breathe

Desperate


For you


Cutting stones


In my head


On a field of dishonor


Bloody grass covered with dying wishes made in vain


Merciless Battle


Cutting me apart


From inside


Bloody tears


Ruptured spirit


Spilling out


Like vomit


Vile


Remnant of love


Hurts too bad to know anything else


Never can be right


All my fault


I love you


I am alone


Empty of all but


Forsaken love

What was my life ?


What was my hope ?

They drip into this pool


Wash me away


Take me


Down


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© 2008 Scarrzz
Published on Wednesday, July 2, 2008.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i really love this.....i dont really know what to say other than i found it amzing....it has alot of things i find my self thinking about.....its beautiful

  • A former member wrote: ...sighs:( I know this so well... this is beautiful

  • snakeskingrin On Thursday, July 3, 2008, snakeskingrin (59)By person wrote:

    Yep, it's all in vain...100 years from now we will be cold and moldering in a forgotten grave...:)Snake


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