Empty
By Scarrzz
My stomach feels empty, even though I've eaten;
and my chest too, like my heart inside is way too small.
My eyes sharply perceive my surroundings
but I don't notice anything beautiful.
The music in my ears might as well be a hundred jackhammers
tearing up the concrete that could have paved my way.
No matter, I have nowhere to go
and the journey would be pointless without you.
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From 9/9/06
This was the first poem I wrote
after the beginning of the end.
When hope had been struck a mortal blow,
but still stubbornly refused to die.
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© 2008 Scarrzz
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On Thursday, May 13, 2010, musicalsuicide
(58) wrote:
that kind of made me sad....... in a good way though. i loved IT
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A former member wrote:
I loved it.....................
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A former member wrote:
I've known that feeling before-wondering what the hell you're supposed to do because suddenly there doesn't seem to be any point...great piece
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A former member wrote:
" No matter, I have nowhere to go
and the journey would be pointless without you. " ...*sighs* I can't decsribe what this made me feel... but I liked it. a sigh is all I have. welcome!
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On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, veingo
(526) wrote:
I really liked this one. Don't think I said yet, Welcome to DP. ^V^