Empty

By Scarrzz


My stomach feels empty, even though I've eaten;
and my chest too, like my heart inside is way too small.

My eyes sharply perceive my surroundings
but I don't notice anything beautiful.

The music in my ears might as well be a hundred jackhammers
tearing up the concrete that could have paved my way.

No matter, I have nowhere to go
and the journey would be pointless without you.
















__________________________

From 9/9/06

This was the first poem I wrote
after the beginning of the end.

When hope had been struck a mortal blow,
but still stubbornly refused to die.

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© 2008 Scarrzz
Published on Saturday, September 9, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • musicalsuicide On Thursday, May 13, 2010, musicalsuicide (58)By person wrote:

    that kind of made me sad....... in a good way though. i loved IT

  • A former member wrote: I loved it.....................

  • A former member wrote: I've known that feeling before-wondering what the hell you're supposed to do because suddenly there doesn't seem to be any point...great piece

  • A former member wrote: " No matter, I have nowhere to go and the journey would be pointless without you. " ...*sighs* I can't decsribe what this made me feel... but I liked it. a sigh is all I have. welcome!

  • veingo On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    I really liked this one. Don't think I said yet, Welcome to DP. ^V^


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