Welcome to Hating Me

By Circe Avalon

Though I be a tender woman, a docile fragile flower
I do have my claws
Although my sex may be deemed delicate
I fight with amour and teeth like no other
I fight with my words
They bite into hearts
They freeze up the brain
They make your mind go blank
and your tongue go numb
and that's just the first part
The venom will ~ writhe in your blood
For this vipers poison is like a drug
In a few hours you'll be
cursing vehemently between your
gnashing teeth
white knuckled fist
raging, clasping and unfurling your ridged fingers
imaging my dainty throat entrapped in their menacing embrace
Your blood will boil and your mind will swim with all the tortures you would dearly love to inflict
upon me
this tender, fragile, defenseless woman...
You love to hate me

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© 2008 Circe Avalon
Published on Friday, March 28, 2008.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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Comments on "Welcome to Hating Me"

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  • Ashteroth On Tuesday, December 23, 2008, Ashteroth (190)By person wrote:

    Again great expression of dark emotion, however I will argue your strength lays not in your ability to sink to the level of those who mistreat you, but to love despite it and be a person you want to live with for the rest of your life, as you will have to.

  • NikesRain On Saturday, March 29, 2008, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    perfect...

  • elisa On Friday, March 28, 2008, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    haha.... i love it ... what more can i say.. i love it.

  • A former member wrote: hmmm...we'd probably get along...


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