Everlasting

By RubyXero

In between darkness and light
a place i call my home.
A lush green world
gentle breeze caressing my soul.
My solace.
Peace inhaled and absorbed
with each burst of air.

In exploration
this energy is brilliant!
Enlivening my senses
so I draw nearer.
...what is the cause
of this entriguing pull?

...And so I found him
that day. Right at
the path of eternity.
With stone of onyx.
of sorrow, and of trust.

He bowed and extended
his hand to me. A beautiful
dance of grace.
An invitation...

Fingers entwined together
we journ up to the precipice
as tears fell upon my being.

Wrapped around one another
we shall in this moment share.

...As we plunged into the void.

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© 2007 RubyXero
Published on Wednesday, December 5, 2007.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I like the last line.. I saw the void once.. it was the most beautiful thing I've ever known.. I hope that's where we go when we die.. it was so peaceful and at rest..

  • palenoble On Friday, December 7, 2007, palenoble (47)By person wrote:

    reminds me of Moorcock's 'The dancers at the end of time'.. very vivid..nicely written

  • Kaleidoscope_Heart On Thursday, December 6, 2007, Kaleidoscope_Heart (111)By person wrote:

    I love the fantasy-laced imagery. And yes, it is very dream-like. " and we plunge into another world." - Oh my! ;). Loved it

  • MESUN On Thursday, December 6, 2007, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    oh beautiful! excellent. i have a lingering taste of sugar and amaretto from reading this. loved the grouping of onyx, sorrow, and trust. this seems to be proof that the sun is always shining somewhere.

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, December 5, 2007, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    i agree with Narcissa... very image evoking piece but with a darker dreaminess to it... nicely done

  • Narcissa On Wednesday, December 5, 2007, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    I like this - It reminds me of a dream...


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