Comments by OLd SouL
- "I wish I had half the emotion you do in your writes. This ending broke me.. so sighful. You are a beauty to be reckoned with. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "To hold you" by maddin foxxxy
- "Everyone of your writes has a distinct feeling to it... Its wildly intriguing with a tinge of mystery. I love getting to know you through your writes. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "To Love" by maddin foxxxy
- "I don't know what to say.. after all of the comments I've left you, this one gives me trouble. I think the subject matter is too intense for me to recognize.. I'm weak that way. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "To Love" by maddin foxxxy
- "'I am a million pieces
I've swallowed myself
whole' :) I love your poetry so much. My eyes lit up and my fingers went to clicking feverishly when I saw your name on the new works list. *sigh* I am happy now. :::OLd
"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Here's to Tonight" by maddin foxxxy
- "..a heartbeat can't be trusted as a measure of time... sometimes the heart will skip a beat... sometimes it races... But there are times when a moment seems to short... or far too long..."
Posted by OLd SouL on "A Song For the Lost One" by maddin foxxxy
- "'She's painted in plastic threads' Where do you come up with this stuff? This one amazes me... I've read it like 5 times so far.. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Aid to the chilD" by maddin foxxxy
- "I tried to write something similar to this but it didn't come out right.. I'm glad it didn't.. because I found this. And it delves deeper than I could ever convey. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Claro de Luna" by maddin foxxxy
- "'and floating by there are
all the faces
I have worn' I love that line.. as well as others in this poem. I like the feeling the conclusion has. Inviting and intriguing. :::OLd
"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Dirty Looks & Adrenaline" by maddin foxxxy
- ":) my fav part was the verse starting with, 'I carry the skies'. The ending was spectacular. This poem embraced me. You are amazing. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Entre Brazos" by maddin foxxxy
- "Its seems with some of your stuff I relate to the other end of the spectrum. So, your viewpoint brings much understanding. *unties the string around your finger* Much easier on the heart. Love it, hun :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Yellow Post It" by maddin foxxxy
- "sshhh.. I'm still trying to picture you naked. Seriously, it was as if you inhaled the world and then with one breath, painted a mural on the sky of what you percieve. *muah* wonderful :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Nudity of Expression" by maddin foxxxy
- "you found the right chords to strum and you played them as if your fingers were made of the instrument. I couldn't say that one verse inparticular was my fav. Every bit flowed all too well through my mind. Love it, hun. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Here's My Guitar" by maddin foxxxy
- "'This shadow
will follow the lonely
side of you
And will make you
company
if you want it to...' I think that right there really hit home with me... Its seems like the majority of your work touches me deep... This is no exception. Well done again"
Posted by OLd SouL on "New SeNse of Breathing" by maddin foxxxy
- "everytime I read something of yours I try to comment as to do it justice. I'm afraid my words of praise will become redundant. Know that I absolutely love this. You are an amazing spirit full of undeniable talent. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Lean Yourself" by maddin foxxxy
- "about half way through this I had a grin ear to ear and I don't know why... this one did touch me so... I can't describe. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "this december.-" by maddin foxxxy
- "*snuggles up to maddin* "A face that cryes is a life that rains inside". You're so beautiful. Can I borrow your soul for the weekend? :::OLd "
Posted by OLd SouL on "the =- way -=" by maddin foxxxy
- "the verse that starts off as As I breathe, really grabs me. I typically do drown my thoughts until they are outside of me or at least I try. Great write again hun. *hugs* OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Sober Up" by maddin foxxxy
- "i like the ying yang feel of this. I can relate when I internalized the emotions... I have a constant struggle with my saint and sinner on the inside. great write hun. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Of Saints and Sin" by maddin foxxxy
- "*hugs maddin* I love the way you write. So sad yet beautiful... this shows the progression or combination well. its something I am for in myself. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Spies" by maddin foxxxy
- "you amaze me yet again. the beauty you captured in a slumbered soul was enchanting. a pleasure to read. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Eyes Open" by maddin foxxxy
- "oh wow maddin, your words are always beautiful. There are so many different aspects about this work that are killer. Bit of reincarnation, happy facade, and the touch of hope that you describe.. just wonderful. You rock. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Clock" by maddin foxxxy
- "wondering if those feelings are genuine or is he just playing "the role". great write as usual maddin. you always have a charming way of describing an emotion"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Pretentious Affair" by maddin foxxxy
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