Yellow Post It

By maddin foxxxy

I remember to remember
the traces of your face ...
this silhouette
you had
...how you forgot your grace...

I remembered to remember ..
You've remembered
to forget

I've stepped upon
something else
you wouldn't even believe
you wouldn't dare to touch
you wouldn't dare to dream

I remember your tears printed
in a letter sent to me
and was that you crying
or water splashed to it?

The traces of your face ...
indefinite in miles
this darkness
of yours..
how you forgot to smile...

I've remembered to remember
how I was meant to feel
and what I wanted splattered
and never meant to heal

I remember
just your look
fixated downwards..
there was something you forgotten
and saw it just too far ..

I've seen the leaves
that fall....
I've seen how time
can crawl...
I've found out
my belongings
and some place new
to live
and you wouldn't believe
the air inhaled upon
and you wouldn't dare to dream
in whom I have become...

The silence in your absence ..
distance as you're
gone
the traces I remember
too rusted
to recall ...

I've remembered to remember
and how could you
forget?

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Copyright 2004 maddin foxxxy
Published on Tuesday, February 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • dropsofhate On Monday, January 10, 2005, dropsofhate (45)By person wrote:

    one of the most wonderfully beautiful poem ny eyes have ever read. ♥!

  • Drea On Thursday, February 26, 2004, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    "I remembered to remember .. You've remembered to forget " i dont think anything i saw will be enough..so i will just tell you, i deeply enjoyed this. ~Drea~

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, February 24, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    your writings are so timeless, this contains a wisdom that distance has produced......you have done so very well here...............urban

  • OLd SouL On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    Its seems with some of your stuff I relate to the other end of the spectrum. So, your viewpoint brings much understanding. *unties the string around your finger* Much easier on the heart. Love it, hun :::OLd

  • purr_verse On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    oh...so poignant...the theme so effective, emotive... lovely work. :) purr. (and Spiritus is right...beautiful pic!)

  • Midnight Phoenix On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    Very creative theme you've built here. Nice flow and catchy wording. I'm sure I'll remember this read for awhile!

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340)By person wrote:

    such a sweet piece...just like everything else you write...just like you seem to be...(reference to pic)...-l-

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