this december.-
By maddin foxxxy
...oh, i've come to know You
in ways i never knew to know.
and now that i know who You are
i cannot forget You.
now that i've seen what You look like
i cannot close my eyes.
.
.
.
.
don't tell me
You need me
or else You'll have me
holding on to You.
.
.
.
.
it's coming back to me
the warmth i never got heated from.
the peace after my wars.
a kiss between the bars.
and looking up the stars.
everything You are
is all i wanted to my heart.
.
.
.
.
remebering who i am
in your eyes
divine.
when i want to break
You stick it all
apart.
.
.
.
.
the silouettes of the sun
everytime the morning
shines.
we don't get to sleep.
and we forget to wake.
everytime there it comes
the best of days.
.
.
.
.
pressure's tolerable.
minutes bearable.
and You are
You are
b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l.
.
.
.
.
i've felt the way
you smile.
i felt me smiling too.
the way You sang
Your life
was sweet tune to me.
and somehow in You
i do believe
the way i dreamt You
in this december 2003.
Comments on "this december.-"
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On Thursday, February 7, 2008, totaltrip
(36) wrote:
oh boy. i love it. i just do.
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On Friday, June 4, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
This is so...soft..pretty.I find its simplicity so beautiful and captivating...wonderful piece (sorry about the rubbish comment) :P..Butterfly..xxx...
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On Tuesday, December 16, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
i really enjoyed this. i agree with six. you words are comforting. great as always ~Drea~
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A former member wrote:
'the warmth i never got heated from' December will always feel warm whenEver I feel this poem;b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l, as it is, breathing from your beautiful soul...
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On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
about half way through this I had a grin ear to ear and I don't know why... this one did touch me so... I can't describe. :::OLd
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On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
beautiful and beautiful again. just lovely. purr
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On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
I love the way, when I am reading your poems, that time just stops. And then you begin to narrate a dream for me. And most of the time at their end, as with this one, I make a wish that someday someone will feel the same way about me.
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A former member wrote:
Oh this is so very beautiful. This is like a little treasure I've come upon. I think I will favorize it...
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On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Lost_Soul
(34) wrote:
A very uplifting poem. I actually feel a little happier after reading this.
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On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Such comforting words...should we all be so lucky.
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A former member wrote:
hey, I really like this peice , very beautiful....(sighs) u are pretty Maddin
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