Alone with company ..
By maddin foxxxy
I hold on to the
particular moments
that were never there
for anyone
to see
A smile turns in laughter
and I hold on to
your face ...
Nobody else could look
at you this way.
I hold on to the
small parts of the day,
just to taste another
kind of perfume
and forget your own
But how do you forget
what you swore to know ??
Your smile turned
to laughter
and my eyes have grown
worn ..
I hold on to the instant
I held you close to me
and it was there
for no one else
to see
oh ..but ...no one could say
and nobody could ever
tell me ..
Your arms
two vacant spaces
as I held
myself .
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© 2006 maddin foxxxy
Published on Saturday, January 28, 2006.
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On Friday, June 15, 2012, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
Beautifully written by a beautiful woman.
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On Wednesday, February 13, 2008, SGT Bloth
(162) wrote:
*wraps arms around you* there there sweetie...is this a lil better? you made me weep again...God I feel like a Wuss...I gotta stop reading these
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On Thursday, September 21, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
"Your arms two vacant spaces as I held myself ." - great ending for this piece. Good one! Ciao, T/S
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On Wednesday, September 20, 2006, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
Takes me to the days when I visited my then fiance's flat near panhandlers park. How naive I was, yet how poignant the memory.
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On Monday, July 10, 2006, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
I have to agree with humility. It was the end that was so devastingly potent. I miss reading your work... I hope you are doing well. :::OLd
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On Friday, April 28, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
Your poetry burns, not only the heart but your whole being
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On Thursday, April 27, 2006, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
the last line takes all......and you have given so much here........your sincerity binds me to your prose.......urban
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A former member wrote:
the imagery is striking...."Your smile turned to laughter and my eyes have grown worn .. " vivid expression of loss...very moving
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On Saturday, January 28, 2006, darkdesires
(139) wrote:
Ouch I feel the pain in this... I'm sorry... and I definately know how it is to feel those two vacant spaces... I still have them...