The Killer In You

By maddin foxxxy

I just might scape from life
or live to slowly die,
if caught up in your arms...
I am menaced to die.
It was you there oppressing me
with all passion and lust...
I was defenseless yet aware
of myself against the wall.
Frail and deceased,
thoughts you stole and shaped...
you slapped them one by one
with no sign of shame.
You smiled and i knew
happiness was somewhere
navigating in your eyes,
but sinking in somewhere.
Almost i was crying and
kissed to communicate
that i am woman by transition,
and your lover tonight.
Love, it tickles and it itches...
"Love is just ilusion", you say,
and you reach dissapointment with the same
hand you grab me...and i get chills and shake.
You know you weaken me..to the last degree,
and your fingers swim past me
to manipulate...
and there i fall in bed.
"Stop..don't...please....."
I now hear my plead inside,
as i resist...i fail...
stronger...dead between your arms.

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Copyright 2003 maddin_sexxxy
Published on Monday, July 14, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: very beautiful

  • UnsilentMajority On Monday, November 24, 2003, UnsilentMajority (18)By person wrote:

    well, well, well...you dont give yourself enough credit...iam blown away again, i love your works!

  • OLd SouL On Sunday, September 28, 2003, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    this piece chewed me up and spit me out. After reading the last line, I was like, "Ahh, wow."

  • diavolessa On Sunday, July 27, 2003, diavolessa (207)By person wrote:

    it was poemty like yours that I missed reading the most! I think you have outdone yourself with this one, it's grrreat! bravo! {dia}

  • Midnight Phoenix On Sunday, July 27, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    My mind drifted into this piece while reading and started feeding off the words and the meanings. I felt myself starting to shake from a memory brought by this piece. Thanks for posting.

  • Stranger On Tuesday, July 15, 2003, Stranger (263)By person wrote:

    This is probably my favorite from you. I felt and saw many things vividly while reading it. Excellent!

  • Aurora_Light On Tuesday, July 15, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    this is good my friend i like it

  • A former member wrote: "You know you weaken me..to the last degree" wow... just wow. #flower#

  • A Velvet Tongue On Monday, July 14, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    Just beautiful...being taken in so deeply, is such a wicked treat! Love it! ~Velvet~

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