Aid to the chilD
By maddin foxxxy
She's painted in plastic threads
she is me
and she wishes
she bends
Fire is inside the soul
it doesn't burns
it just aches
from the time she is born
till the last mistake
Is it what matters
to shine and to grow?
Her picture is my face
and I can't remember
where she's been misplaced
A fossil-like existence
Her eyes are childlike
they still hope in for something
they still live in to see
waiting maKes her wonder
wonder makes her need
Now there's only breathing
air that leaves from me
She's painted in plastic threads
colors blue and red
Her soul is cage-less
and has no end
Her voice is my sound now
childlike again
There's running
and laughter
she is me
and she falls
there's no editing in words
She's plastic, she bends
there's nothing
Not anything
A band-aid
can't mend.
Comments on "Aid to the chilD"
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
this poem invokes vivid images of childhood...once again, you are brilliant...and i agree with purr_verse regarding that verse..it's also my favorite...awesome...-l-
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On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
fantastic... your mind is a veritable treasure chest of wonder. I had the same thought as OLd. I am in awe. Fox
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On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
great imagery, both original and vivid... a poignantly emotional piece with a fantastic conclusion...soft and painful simultaneously... and i really love "waiting maKes her wonder wonder makes her need" especially. :)
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On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
wow, most enjoyable, the emotion is radiant in every word.~~~Grave
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On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
it just aches from the time she is born till the last mistake... wow...new favorite...this one made me smile, remembering that childhood simplicity...*afraid*
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On Tuesday, March 23, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
'She's painted in plastic threads' Where do you come up with this stuff? This one amazes me... I've read it like 5 times so far.. :::OLd