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Here's to Tonight
By maddin foxxxy
It's beautiful outside
tonight
They've fallen
through time
all the stars
we can't even begin to count ..
I feel I am no poet,
but this is poetry
to me
Seeing you fade
into the vast..
I'm breathing
the non-existent .. .
if you are gone
I never know
you're always here
within my soul
My home's
subjective.. .
carried along
inside dirty suitcases,
the trip's been long
I used to be so little
I used to feel so small
This is not complete
This is not full grown
Nobody Knows
how the story goes.. .
the smile can lie
the smile might show
I am a million pieces
I've swallowed myself
whole
This diseased environment
breeding minds
at need
We want to be so happy
We crave to just be
pleased
I used to be the victim
I'd keep them all around
And hell has pulled me under
inside a heavenly sound
Outside is so much better
Right now it is the best
Outside of my head .. .
The stars are shining bright
It's beautiful outside
tonight
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Copyright 2004 maddin foxxxy
Published on Thursday, June 10, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Here's to Tonight"
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, frost bite
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wrote:
This is such a beautiful write, your descriptions are just unreal, excellent as always *captain frost*
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
I don't know how you keep filling these black pages with such wonderful work. Every time I read from you, I feel like I'm reading something designed for me.
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
It's just that everything feels so natural and sincere. It's amazing how well your words reach out and pull the reader inside. Wonderful as always.
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On Friday, June 11, 2004, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
'I am a million pieces I've swallowed myself whole' :) I love your poetry so much. My eyes lit up and my fingers went to clicking feverishly when I saw your name on the new works list. *sigh* I am happy now. :::OLd
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On Friday, June 11, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
your wqords are so lyrical and relaxing... I always feel serene and at peace when I read your work. This is simply beautiful.
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
Here's to your poem! nicely done. I will look at some more! A_C
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
Here's to you poem! very nice. it almost made me cry. A_C
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
oh wow...that was beautiful, I love the near surreal imagery, lovely *~seraph~*
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
i love how you breathe poetry softly across the page...the lines wander into my conciousness and linger...very beautiful work, once again
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