New SeNse of Breathing
By maddin foxxxy
I am new
and I am reborn...
and could you really tell it
over
the smile that i've worn?
I've lied
because I feel for you
and still I end up
rescueing something
true...
from the eyes
you cry
You are lonely
and you know it..
You want me
and you show it..
But you won't give one
step further...
to the place
we'll end up to be;
Because I think that
you will kNoW me
and tear away
from here.............
For now we
laugh it out
For now we
kiss about...
And forget
about the time
screaming at our clocks.
I give my hand
to you
empty as it is...
with ignorance to carry
as my only bliss.
This shadow
will follow the lonely
side of you
And will make you
company
if you want it to...
I am new
and I am reborn
Inside the eyes
you cry
and where you crash
aside...
My eyes
can only hear......
My ears
can only see..
...how beautiful it is...
Comments on "New SeNse of Breathing"
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
beautifu and powerfull the flow was grand and i loved it
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
I will leave these three dots ... as a representation of my speechlessness for this piece.
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On Friday, January 16, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
'This shadow will follow the lonely side of you And will make you company if you want it to...' I think that right there really hit home with me... Its seems like the majority of your work touches me deep... This is no exception. Well done again
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A former member wrote:
'And forget
about the time
screaming at our clocks.' Well said.
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A former member wrote:
this flows just beautifully, very nice write, i'll be back for more. alot of emotion in this.
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On Wednesday, January 14, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx
(64) wrote:
i love the rhyme and rhythm to this piece. the whole thing is great but i especially like the first two verses. they really stood out to me.