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Pretentious Affair
By maddin foxxxy
Had abandoned myself
to perish
inside the moments
that carried
the desires
not granted.
Every step I had encouraged
was a step back
from what I really
wanted.
And did you fit in
the movie
I made for us?
Did you kiss
when you meant to?
Did you love
when you least expected to?
I lived through the standards
of the road
of an every-day routine.
Everything at first
fills in a
pleasure-like steam.
Did you like me
when you said you did?
Were you satisfied
from your special needs?
I can only detach
from everything I know...
And change into
some other kind of skin....
I do kiss
when I mean to...
I do love
when I least expect to...
Had fun in pasting
the pieces of me....
and are you as happy
as you're pretending to be?
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Copyright 2003 maddin_sexxxy
Published on Wednesday, October 22, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Pretentious Affair"
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On Friday, November 19, 2004, darkleprechaun
(56)
wrote:
mmm... very tastey. i enjoyed this much... and will be reading more.
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On Saturday, November 8, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
Ok... You need to tell me how to tap your creativity and wordplay. It definately can be hard to tell the difference between the sincere and the pretenders. It looks like that would leave us with a hopeful thought.
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On Saturday, November 1, 2003, Bloody_Hands
(20) wrote:
I think we all see a bit of ourselves in this piece, amazing work you have here. ~Lynne
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A former member wrote:
reminds me of my life.
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A former member wrote:
"And did you fit in the movie I made for us?" Great line! I really enjoyed reading this poem, S. Even though I do not like the hurt you mustve felt but its not yur pieces pasted its the fools pretentious lies who thought he was pasting yu whos in pieces
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On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
the lines in this stir memories of a poem i wrote a while back a poem no one has ever seen, beautiful job
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On Saturday, October 25, 2003, Trichotillomaniac
(42) wrote:
" Did you kiss when you meant to? Did you love when you least expected to?" I know this feeling, this questioning, I like this..a lot
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On Thursday, October 23, 2003, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
wondering if those feelings are genuine or is he just playing "the role". great write as usual maddin. you always have a charming way of describing an emotion
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On Wednesday, October 22, 2003, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
"And did you fit in the movie I made for us?" Search for perfection and you will find nothing. Very nice, I liked this very much *~seraph~*
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On Wednesday, October 22, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
I sit and stare at this and wonder, I see so much of me in this very nice.............O.
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