To hold you
By maddin foxxxy
Someone’s suffering
Someone suffers again
Pictures of light to the drain . .
Someone sees the figures are fading ..
His life is the same thing
And it isn’t changing
Something goes away
And nothing comes again
His way
Something he held dear
Is gone ..
Someone’s deserted
In his world alone
He knows he could reach it
But just can’t
He feels he could catch it
But just went
Something he was
isn't anymore
Something he could be
Can be no more
If i’d hold you i’d see the past unwind ..
I’d hold you and know
the future left behind
Can feel it inside the pain you pass me by
The look just so hallow to ask me “come through†..
The kiss just too shallow
To follow my tongue as you do
If i’d hold on through your hell
I’d find myself
Through the mirror i’d see
You resemble me
A magnet to the steel
Your pain the same degree as the one I feel
Your figure, a shadow
that passes
through
your eyes just too beautiful
to let them fade too
yes i'm aching as you do
to hold you
Comments on "To hold you"
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
"If i’d hold you i’d see the past unwind .. "..such simplicity that evokes the emotions...wonderful...-l-
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On Friday, August 27, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
your empathy reaches far........your words carry love to the un-reachable, your sight is keen, and your heart gold..........all this i can tell from your words.......well done my friend.........urban
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, TheReap
(38) wrote:
The last stanza really grabbed me - nice write!
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
wow, i read your work, and it's like ghosts leaving me messages to decipher...so elusive, yet i'd do anything in my power to solve the mystery...beautiful as always...
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
I wish I had half the emotion you do in your writes. This ending broke me.. so sighful. You are a beauty to be reckoned with. :::OLd
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On Sunday, August 22, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
wow--what you are expressing here really hits close to home for me--especially the closing stanzas--clear and emotional with beautiful imagery