To hold you

By maddin foxxxy

Someone’s suffering
Someone suffers again
Pictures of light to the drain . .

Someone sees the figures are fading ..
His life is the same thing
And it isn’t changing

Something goes away
And nothing comes again
His way
Something he held dear
Is gone ..
Someone’s deserted
In his world alone

He knows he could reach it
But just can’t
He feels he could catch it
But just went

Something he was
isn't anymore
Something he could be
Can be no more

If i’d hold you i’d see the past unwind ..
I’d hold you and know
the future left behind
Can feel it inside the pain you pass me by
The look just so hallow to ask me “come through” ..
The kiss just too shallow
To follow my tongue as you do

If i’d hold on through your hell
I’d find myself
Through the mirror i’d see
You resemble me
A magnet to the steel
Your pain the same degree as the one I feel


Your figure, a shadow
that passes
through
your eyes just too beautiful
to let them fade too

yes i'm aching as you do
to hold you

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Copyright 2004 maddin foxxxy
Published on Sunday, August 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340)By person wrote:

    "If i’d hold you i’d see the past unwind .. "..such simplicity that evokes the emotions...wonderful...-l-

  • urbanhumility On Friday, August 27, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    your empathy reaches far........your words carry love to the un-reachable, your sight is keen, and your heart gold..........all this i can tell from your words.......well done my friend.........urban

  • TheReap On Sunday, August 22, 2004, TheReap (38)By person wrote:

    The last stanza really grabbed me - nice write!

  • girlafraid On Sunday, August 22, 2004, girlafraid (479)By person wrote:

    wow, i read your work, and it's like ghosts leaving me messages to decipher...so elusive, yet i'd do anything in my power to solve the mystery...beautiful as always...

  • OLd SouL On Sunday, August 22, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    I wish I had half the emotion you do in your writes. This ending broke me.. so sighful. You are a beauty to be reckoned with. :::OLd

  • Northstar On Sunday, August 22, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    wow--what you are expressing here really hits close to home for me--especially the closing stanzas--clear and emotional with beautiful imagery

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