Dirty Looks & Adrenaline

By maddin foxxxy

I'll be hiding
inside your dirty look ..
take me from there
to where you want me
to go
and drift
into liberation

Poison yourself
in my veins

I want to feel your
drug on me
breakin' through my system
and makin' each inch
your home

My place is your home ..


Torn as it may seem
The drapes are on
the floor
the water's drowning
whole
and floating by there are
all the faces
I have worn

But now I've seen it
through
Inside the savage
in your eyes
is where I want to
lie

To wear another kind of face
and change into some
other kind of grace
the face
with the smile

this night
will be wild

this night
is on fire

I'll be drinkin'
for the sake of us
I'll be hidin'
inside your
dirty look

let's take it
from there

I'm an open book
..

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Copyright 2004 maddin foxxxy
Published on Sunday, March 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Reefer_rave On Tuesday, August 14, 2007, Reefer_rave (139)By person wrote:

    now I need to smoke a cigarette this was so good

  • Stranger On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, Stranger (263)By person wrote:

    Utterly fantastic. This has deep reaching tentacles that left their mark in the remotest parts of my being.

  • A former member wrote: 'Poison yourself in my veins' deep/dark/edged...poetry to drink of flesh for intoxification...

  • Midnight Phoenix On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    It feels so natural Maddin. Your creativity is endless, and your words are inspirational. I love the ending. Actually, I love the entire piece!

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Monday, March 15, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340)By person wrote:

    "Torn as it may seem The drapes are on the floor the water's drowning whole and floating by there are all the faces I have worn" this stanza hit me deeply...for no matter what face you have on, in your poetry you will always be beautiful...-l-

  • OLd SouL On Monday, March 15, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    'and floating by there are all the faces I have worn' I love that line.. as well as others in this poem. I like the feeling the conclusion has. Inviting and intriguing. :::OLd

  • flying_fox On Monday, March 15, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    I saw the title and had a feeling it might be one of yours...great words as always. I always feel right 'there' as I read them. Fox

  • A former member wrote: Truly amazing. My favourite "verse" if you want to call it that was "I want to feel your drug on me breakin' through my system and makin' each inch your home " I loved the whole thing. It was gorgeous---Alyssa

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