Comments by lupus tenebrae
- "Hit me hard as well, the style seemed to lend itself to the sorrowful feelings emanating from this piece, as if they fed from one another. Remembrance is part of the healing process, the suture thread for your wounds. Write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Still" by Malcholm Dark
- "Haha you'll never know what crawls out of the woodwork in the backwoods. Like when I came across a bearded lady, and not a circus train around. Are the years of inbreeding really worth it for epic banjo-picking skills? Another hilarious treat, write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Ballad Of The Mountain Banjo Clan" by Malcholm Dark
- "Haha "You cannibalistic devil." If cannibalism is to eat one's own kind, does that mean you're actually an onion? Man I haven't had a bloomin' onion in years, definitely reminds of those good times though. Write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Peel Away My Layers" by Malcholm Dark
- "Haha "If your starving to death, never eat your parrot." Sounds like something in a Pirating For Dummies book. Probably the best reason I've heard for making someone walk the plank, write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Death On The High Seas" by Malcholm Dark
- "So I guess it's the Flying Lasagna Monster now? Haha, I love lasagna and all, but I can't I'll fall down to my knees in praise of it, in public anyway. Another day brightener, and perhaps a catalyst to a new religious movement lol. Write on. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I Found The Gods And Heaven" by Malcholm Dark
- "Haha that's why you should never leave the movie in the the dvd player. Damn that Kurt Russell lol. You always deliver unique comedic moments with these pieces, write on. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Whispers in the dark" by Malcholm Dark
- "At one point after reading this, I imagined a clown and a hooker on Maury trying to find the baby daddy haha. "She hides her emotions inside her sleeve" perhaps the same place she's keeping the razor? Worthy prose yet again, write on. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "She' s A Lady" by Malcholm Dark
- "Don't forget, it's also the best place to get actual fireworks, sparklers can kiss my ass lol. Drinking tequila while watching the sunset, one word, "paradise". Write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Spanish Limes" by Malcholm Dark
- "Haha I guess it's what you would call the snickering classroom syndrome. One word out of context is all it takes. I've had to alter works of my own because I was worried certain words would offend. Not only was it an extra effort, but it took away from the original vibe of the pieces. The Flintstone's part may have left me with undesired images, but it made a good point. I want my words back too. Write on my friend.
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Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I Want My Words Back" by Malcholm Dark
- "I think deep inside, there's a Grinch in everyone. An ugly green head waiting to rear itself at the most inopportune moment. Dr. Seuss never sounded so dark and dismal, write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "My Ugly Green Head" by Malcholm Dark
- "If only we were in the 90's, this would be that hit song playing on the radio all day. The structure of this piece was just as hysterical as the content. I guess as times change, so do genders lol, Write on. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Wiener Rap" by Malcholm Dark
- "I've probably heard every word in this piece growing up around a racist family. I never dared to speak up against them, just listen to them wallow in their spite. They were those kinds of people that felt the world owed them for existing. They did prove that racism is alive and broiling, like a dormant volcano. Write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Who Is A Racist" by Malcholm Dark
- "A familiar territory indeed, makes me picture a world painted entirely in gray. Colorless, bland, lackluster, nicely put. Exceptional as always, write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Edge Of Obscurity" by Malcholm Dark
- "Sort of gives you a perspective on the holidays, away from all of the festivities, from the overplayed Christmas specials, a darkness underneath the fake holiday cheer. Covered in angel dust.Another brilliant piece, write on my friend. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "ABCs And Heroin For Christmas" by Malcholm Dark
- "Holy sex dungeons Batman! What an entertaining read, just goes to show you, one day your robbing banks, the next your tied to a bed awaiting spankings lol. Write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Trouble In Gotham" by Malcholm Dark
- ""A polished knob, shined with discrete". Either my mind is too far into the gutter, or I'm hyper like a crack head today, but that part gave me a hearty chuckle ;). A verry humorous read, write on my friend. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Tweet-Tweet" by Malcholm Dark
- "Those were some very insightful fourth graders, apparently they were secretly philosophers lol. Another satisfying piece, and an interesting take on time. Write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Relative Time" by Malcholm Dark
- "Haha I'd take clowns over mimes any day, after all Pennywise wasn't a mime. It got really deep a few times, "They attempt to laugh. They make no sound." it's like mimes are robots, and laughing isn't in their programming. Another fine piece, write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Why Clowns Hate Mimes" by Malcholm Dark
- "A fine tribute to a movie classic, the quotes were a very nice touch. I could almost feel my head do a 360 over this piece lol. I enjoyed this greatly, write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "An Exorcist" by Malcholm Dark
- "This may sound strange, but this put me inside the mind of the jack. The poor jack also seems to have dual personalities, I now both fear and pity him lol. Another amazing work, you haven't disappointed my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "One-eyed Jack" by Malcholm Dark
- "I'll bet Ted resorted to the old "wax on, wax off" routine again lol. I couldn't help but think of the song afterward, now I won't be able to sleep. Another excellent piece Dark, hilarious,write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "So Much For Kung Fu" by Malcholm Dark
- "Truly one for all of the freaks out there. Put on stage for the mindless amusement of others. Excellent piece as always my friend, write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Circus Freak" by Malcholm Dark
- "Reminds me of my uncle, he loved his cigars. The air itself still seems to carry that scent, like he's still around. It could've been addiction among other things that killed him. Another fine piece my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Nicotine Slave" by Malcholm Dark
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