Still

By Malcholm Dark

Deep without motion... still
My soul is empty, my soul remains blue.
Choked with emotion... still
My life is hollow, my life without you.

I feel only you... still
My heart tells me you haven't gone.
I need only you... still
My mind tells me you have moved on.

Still...
I'm shaking all over
Memories crashing in.

Still...
I know it's all over
Let the healing begin.

Let my healing begin.
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Remembering you... still.


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Copyright 2011 Malcholm Dark
Published on Thursday, February 17, 2011.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: That is so sad... so emotional... I can feel the heartbreak through your words... makes my heart ache ....

  • alex herewane On Monday, February 21, 2011, alex herewane (149)By person wrote:

    I think it's great that you loved someone so much and a shame it's over. I enjoy your work WRITE ON.

  • lupus tenebrae On Thursday, February 17, 2011, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    Hit me hard as well, the style seemed to lend itself to the sorrowful feelings emanating from this piece, as if they fed from one another. Remembrance is part of the healing process, the suture thread for your wounds. Write on my friend. Scholar

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