Comments by All Members
- "thanks for being their voice...
sad, and lonely possibly just how they must've felt at the end. well done mal!!!"
Posted by natalie on "Take Me Home" by Malcholm Dark
- "I love the mad hatter and this is a very different and slightly sinister way of perceiving him. I do love this though, great read, great piece, write on."
Posted by Unknown on "The Mad Hatters' Society" by Malcholm Dark
- "Unfortunately I can relate to this. Though sleeping in class is no worry, it's dozing off standing up against the wall in the school corridor and then waking up on the floor to find you've been trampled by your classmates when you need to worry."
Posted by Unknown on "Narcoleptic Youth Gone Wild" by Malcholm Dark
- "Scarlet lessons taught by a wolf, I do agree werewolves are brilliant if somewhat savage predators that can be shown in very different ways, perhaps someone could pity a lone wolf one day........ just a thought.
As always, write on."
Posted by Unknown on "Scarlet Lessons And Silent Gloom" by Malcholm Dark
- "Brilliant structure to this, as if you can hear the words 'swish....thwack...' Great story also, something that happens way too often m'dear. Write on."
Posted by Unknown on "Edge Of Darkness" by Malcholm Dark
- "Very disturbing piece in a good way...Nice to see someone thinking about the victims instead of the malicious doer's...well done...~Dru"
Posted by DarkDruidess on "Take Me Home" by Malcholm Dark
- "Barring the the fact this is of murder victims, it can be applied easily elsewhere. It's someone who's stuck in forever, the world constantly shifting around them, while they themselves, are unmoved. Either way, it's a very sombre existence. Nice to see more of your work, my friend. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Take Me Home" by Malcholm Dark
- "i read this before but was unable to comment as this topic touches the sensitive side of me and sometimes it blurs my vision. this was a sad time in the history of our world, but thankfully times change(sometimes for the better). write on my friend, write on!"
Posted by natalie on "I Am Slave" by Malcholm Dark
- "maybe it's because it 's easter time that the image i got was a crucified christ, bleeding as he carried the cross and the rainbows etc,were the end of his journey. thanks for sharing mal."
Posted by natalie on "The Sky Fell And Rainbows Died" by Malcholm Dark
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