The Damnation
By Malcholm Dark
--Beware
of the manifest indication
for man himself shall know damnation...
All alone I sit here in this jail cell
Welcome to my
world, a living hell.
I feel their hatred running thick
in the air
Crazed town-people screaming everywhere.
Hang-ropes
and whiskey, this is my fate
My time's running short, the hour
is late.
A girl was found in my barn--Murdered she was
But I didn't do it--No, I wasn't the cause.
The law wouldn't
help, no one listen to me
From my cell I was taken, strung up
in a tree.
My house was set on fire, the town watched it go
down
My family trapped inside, screaming their last sound.
With my last breath, I whispered that terrible verse
With my
last breath, I called down a terrible curse.
--By the breath
of vengeance comes the abomination
say goodbye to the righteous and
hello to damnation.
I was burned to ash and buried outside
of town
No prayers, no marker, a forgotten dirt mound.
Black clouds rolled in bringing down the rain
Hell followed
suit in the wake of disdain.
The rain and the ash became
one with the mud
It arose from the ground with a hunger for blood.
No help was in sight as the beast went bloody wild
Death
came calling for every man, woman and child.
Screaming and
gun-fire echoed all around
Body parts and entrails covered the
ground.
And at dawn it began, the town was on fire
It
rose rather quickly, a giant orange pyre.
When the sun finally
rose nothing much remained
But the shameful dead and the evil that
reigned.
--We pray to the heavens for hope and salvation
yet we turn from the truth down the road to damnation.
Made
of ash and mud the beast walked away
The sun hardened its' body
like fire dried clay.
It stumbled and cracked and fell apart
in the sand
Then turned into dust and became one with the land.
It blew to the sight of the death of my family
Where the
rage ensued from all the calamity.
The wind and dust erupted,
encompassing this land
It rose to the roof of the sky, the funnel
was grand.
Everything before was erased from existence
And the area returned to a land of consistence.
A charred
piece of rope still hung from that tree
A reminder of all the
insanity.
The only remnants are five graves and a tombstone
A man and his family, their names are unknown.
--The entire
town paid for my indignation
now I walk alone in the land of damnation.
Author's Note:
thought I would start the year with a good ol' monster piece... Happy new yearComments on "The Damnation"
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A former member wrote:
Referring to your world as a jail cell was brilliant!
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On Monday, January 2, 2012, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Funny thing about clay, it can be molded to whatever you see fit, even revenge. I echo the western idea, and it also has an Egyptian feel to it, perhaps an accursed page from Tutankhamen? Always a pleasure, write onward.
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On Sunday, January 1, 2012, johnbevan17
(52) wrote:
An awesome tale of vengeance Malcholm Reminds me of a western as serenesavage says more along the lines of Pale rider with a twist. Loved it and thank you my friend.:)
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On Sunday, January 1, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Quite removed fron th usual fare sir, well done and most thought provoking piece about what was in the past that carries-over to the present. Thanks MD!
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On Sunday, January 1, 2012, serenesavage91
(33) wrote:
put me in mind of a western horror, very interesting :D I love it.
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On Sunday, January 1, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
A perfect ten as always sir... Thank you so much.. I love reading you...