Our City Of Light... An Ode To Jim Morrison
By Malcholm Dark
From a cactus top, the pod I took
A sour fruit
eaten, o how I shook
I took to remembering my days of long ago
past
When the arms of the beast overcame me at last...
I was
off to find Jim!
I was sailing the airways on wing-ed
flight
When the stars spun away in a cascade of light
Spiraling
forever into oblivion, a perilous plight
Till nothing remained but
the blackness of sight...
On my journey to find Jim!
The pool of ebony gave-way and I was in the city
Permeated by
the derelicts of pain and pity
Down a shadow shrouded alley in
a mired neighborhood
To a darkened specter, upon a corner stood...
The semblance of Jim!
He then beckoned me
Across
his arid sea
To a time when he
Once sought to be free...
I stood in awe of Jim!
Leather pants and boots, his
long tangled hair
With a bearded face and weary-eyed stare
Then an echo of light, Jim envisioned his task
A cry of bewilderment,
soured wine in the cask...
"And so..." began Jim!
"I have pondered many times, then many times more
People descend
into the wound of the festering sore
Into the mouth of the city,
the teeth of the night...
What has become of our city of light?
The howl of metamorphose, a change for the worse
Our
secular revolution betrayed, the ageless curse
As the tears from
generations have clouded the night...
I ask, what has become of our
city of light?
A sea of ignorance entices the horror
of your ways
A ticking clock counts down the end to your days
Who shall save our city and possibly die
Turn from the truth and
face the lie...
The lie, the lie, the lie?"
A glowing
warmth which the morning sun brings
Has awakened me to the music
a bluebird sings
The clouds of my abyss departs a furied sky
With them goes also, 'a rider on the storm...'
Once more Jim,
good-bye!
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Comments on "Our City Of Light... An Ode To Jim Morrison"
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On Monday, September 17, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...Poet for all times. Legend of Legends...
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On Monday, September 17, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Excellent tribute to the Man who got me to pick up a pen and start writing. Very cool visuals and feel to it. Cool. Later -
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On Thursday, March 18, 2010, Wiccad
(124) wrote:
"People are strange when your a stranger,faces look ugly when you're alone" one of my fav lyrics. Good Ode To Jim.
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On Saturday, March 6, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Thank-you, I enjoyed writing this one. Anyone can have this kind of vision with Jim.... just get pods from the cactus top...
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A former member wrote:
Awesome tribute, man. I think I hear, "Mr Mojo RRRIIIISINN!!!"--Draven
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A former member wrote:
I love Jimpan, and this was WONDERFUL. A great tribute to the greatest poet of all time. Excellent. Thanks, Sofia. Bravo!!
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A former member wrote:
What a great Ode! WOW! You leave great visions. =)