Funeral: The Quiet Of Real
By cre
For once I leave my mask
At home, on its shelf of my necessity
My eyes are somber, though no tears fall
As I quietly ponder the harrowing brevity
Of life,
And the days that you could not keep
Now just a reason for mourning,
And a call for us to weep
I am struck, as I always seem to be
By the pervading stillness of mood
As if the parlor which cradles your body
And the building itself are somehow subdued
In the quiet of one last moment
I brush my lips to your face
I am caught in the breathtaking silence
That even the organ dares not efface
In the background, like the children of shadows
I can see the grief-veiled wraiths
Your mother's tears with trailing stains
Etching your epitaph upon her face
For an instant, I meet her eyes
And the touch of our souls is a thing I can feel
Perhaps it's because, just for today
We've abandoned our roles and choose to be real
Trailing down the carpet-hushed hallway
And I consider that it's fitting
This absolute weight of sedate solemnity
To honor this life which was no less than flitting
Pondering, I know, and my heart agrees:
I am thankful my mask stayed behind
We must indulge, in the quietness of real
For something so forever as a final goodbye.
Comments on "Funeral: The Quiet Of Real"
-
A former member wrote:
This poem represents one of the qualities of poetry that I like, which is to be thought provoking. Sometimes poems are a bit of a conundrum, in that you are examining words to determine the deeper meaning of the author. Sometimes the effort is rewarded as the true meaning reveals itself, but sometimes it remains a bit of a mystery and continues to rack the brain. In the former the author conveys their message and in the later the message is lost. This poet travels a bit of a winding trail but ends with a reveal of the deeper message.
-
On Friday, March 12, 2010, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Painful yet, strangely, the realness and coming together brings hope. Brilliant contemplative work.
-
On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
Man you really got me with the 6th stanza. Until then I was wondering where you were going with the analogy of leaving your mask behind.
-
On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
You always seem to capture the essence of a moment so perfectly. This was no different, the analogy was not only fitting but so perfectly true.
-
A former member wrote:
you are a remarkable poet. I don't know if I've ever told you that. You are really really good. I love this poem, even though it kinda brings up my recent sorrow from my late friends. :)
-
On Thursday, May 8, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
wow is all i'll able to say this is very moveing
-
On Thursday, April 3, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
two, in stone church at twilight, vaulted ceiling is about how empty you feel... fingers were intertwined and slowly they slip apart. standing alone on either side of the aisle, facing a stone altar... vows broken with hearts you walk away
-
A former member wrote:
jane you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful words you use them so well, your work always captivates me, and makes me feel as if im there
-
A former member wrote:
this is beautiful... i only have one word...
wow.
-
On Wednesday, April 2, 2003, diavolessa
(207) wrote:
I like teh piece, its wonderful! reading you its always a pleasure! it kinda makes me think that funerals are not that bad! :)
-
A former member wrote:
Wonderful, it feels like a funeral. I love the title, as well.